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petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
No clue if i already made a review but you can see from other reviews this is a great read but of course it not getting picked. :(Signing out,A turtle that wanted to review something
Nice read.
This is fking stupid. He goes from beginner to peak of the universe in months . And im not talking about Legendary. It is couple of stages above that.
It’s good. The world and abilities are that of your typical Xianxia, and the writing isn’t awful, but the main draw is the MC’s ability, you can’t complain about well done comedy after all.
Pls come back
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I feel the story got dragged out so too far and I feel the plot is being recycled a lot, like every new area he goes is a new female follow that will be relevant for the first 10-20 chapters and become background mob in the next, every villians are like "this is impossible, how can he do that....
Lots of repeated actions. Mc has a peerless manual which should him enable to be the fastest in cultivation by far. But his students who are many years younger than him are much faster ....for example his disciples were in 1th realm juxi and our mc the teacher already in 6th realm...kinda a difference of 5 realms...but the students advances so fast that when our mc is 8th realm zhongshi pinnacle out of nowhere kinda his disciple is 8th realm zhongshi intermedia only a small realm difference...? srsly i can only say WTF ! .... anyway world building kinda jumping from kingdom to kingdom and mostly taking someone with him kinda never rly solo....and so on..
180+ chapters in and here is my review starting with mc who is extremely stupid sometimes arrogant and sometimes he thinks everything should be according to his will and he is also somewhat ungrateful . even though author emphasized many time that I lost count that he is mature in the story believe me he is not and if u say that he is only 14 yrs old and he has to be naive than stop calling him mature every other chapter bcz the life he had led should have made our mc mature but it only made him stupid. even though the mc has determination and he is hard-working I really dislike his thought process in many situations be it regarding his second soul bond be it regarding the time he had to endure pain while creating sub space or be it while taking others advice which he never takes bcz he is smart than others I guess this is what he thinks it looks like that to me don't know about others but yeah his thought process makes me think of him not as mc but your typical young masters. the only thing mc ever did not so stupid would be choosing artemis and i like that owl ? more than mc. the way the MC character s developing I really don't know what it will be like and I don't think it will be any good the mc had already pushed me to edge an d if it keeps going on like this I will really drop this book. and yeah revenge is not something our mc thinks about its not like he has strength to do that and it's ok not to think about it untill he gets strong. well other than mc the everything in this novel is pretty good be it world backgroud or story or cultivation system and all. that's all for my review ?
Its an ok story, if the goddamn girlfriend filler chapters were cut out it would be way better. Holy crap sometimes i wonder if the author is obessed with trying to make it seem like young romance. Why does half the chapter have to be texts between the mc and his girl?!?! Jesus Christ he even describes the emojis! You can just look at the chapters name and if it sounds like his girl is a part of it just skip it as nothing interesting happens. This novel is so full of nonsense its not even funny. A sadly watered down story that vividly describes emojis is my final say.Thank you for reading my rant btw?
It took me a minute to get into this book. And I want to read more. Please release more chapters.
