Hi everyoneWelcome to my novel I am an Egyptian writer, and I am now writing my new novel in Arabic I am translating the chapters myself I want to tell you that the novel has 500 Arab chapters so far. But this is the first time it's translated into English. I hope you like the story, and I hope my translation won't stop you from enjoying it. I appreciate your support, and I hope to hear your thoughts and opinions all the time.
The story has a good concept. With people studying Laws and becoming stronger, this whole idea has a huge scope for development.But author has competely messed it up. His character goes from some Justice League type Hero to a guy who will kill anyone within 10-20 chapters. He happily demands money using intimidation. And honestly, I have no problem with it. But so fast? What about inner conflict? What about character development? His personality transition? Nope, nada. One moment he is talking about loving a girl because she is interesting, few chapters later he kill her without any remorse because she insulted him. What? Like honestly?Next is the character. Robotic. Idiotic. He just goes on and on, no plans, no dreams and no personality. Heck, we don't even know how does he looks. What does he likes. His secret dream. Why does he want to get stronger. Nothing.Above all, their is no planning in what he chooses. If you are given knowledge of all the things in your previous world, why not go with Quantum Forces, Energy, etc. Quite tough? What about gravity? Physics? Nuclear physics? But what he chooses? Cloud, fog, rain...Anyway, it's authors personal choice but I wouod have liked to see some preplanning. Some thought in choosing your futures.The cultivation system. It's weird. It's broken in a bad way.I can't describe it in any other way. Law difficulty and power makes no sense. Like Low God of Crow? What the hell did he study to achieve mastery of 'Crow'. And what makes a crow more complex than microorganisms which MC has chosen. And how did he merge ten laws to turn into a Crow law? Author is probably just bull****ting here. Similarly, what's long way? Law of Long way? Wtf? And believe me, it just gets weirder.And like a cherry on a top...a rotten cherry. Editing. It's hard to understand anything they say. I have read better sentences while MTLing. Their are so many problems that I don't even know where to start. Some are quite minor, but the major ones make understanding anything impossible.Author is also trying to make the world vast with a complex developed order structure and power structure. But all the laws just sound stupid and seem like an invitation for a full scale rebellion.I have many more issues but that's it for now.Author please get an editor. That itself will add a full three stars to the rating. We can ignore the rest, but poor editing just kills.of the mood to read anything.
Powerful MC with a unique system. There will be slight spoilers and these are the things I’ve gathered from 60 chapters.How is the MC?He seems a little shameless. But that may just be due to the fact that he can get stronger through being as lazy as possible. And he does get pretty strong in comparison to his peers. He’s a little thick-skinned when dealing with other people’s sh*t and has no qualms with doing something that other disapprove of.Story?Can’t go too much into that. But it seems to be progressing at a reasonable pace. Only one major change has happened so far. But I will say that the MC starts in a base with other children and one mysterious caretaker.Concepts?Similar to cultivation, the novel uses “Degree of Taoification” to represent realms, “Primordial Spirit” to represent amount of Qi (?), “Divine Map” to represent a cultivation technique I guess, and “Spark” to represent the energy in the world. The Spark is corrupted and can easily cause normal humans or cultivators to mutate. Those are the basic concepts, I won’t go into further detail.The System?The system allows the MC to generate laziness points by being lazy. He can use these points to increase his Degree of Taoification, Primordial Spirit, and points on his Divine Map. Other than that, the system doesn’t talk much at all.Impressions?I’m looking forward to when I can read more chapters. I’ve read a few of the other trial reads and this one is one of the better ones if not the best. I like the pace the story is progressing at and am enjoying his growth.
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It's not bad, actually it's good, there's some mistake here and there(won't be mentioning tho, I'll leave to you readers to find out) (what can you say author, a little tactic so they'll read it, right? *evil laugh)Just read it, warning tho, the update.. is kinda slow, I mean.. you can see it yourself.. One or two times update for a week, I think, or perhaps three.Still read, and write a review too.1 review= +1 word?
I love it so much. It made me at the intense moments and sad moments. This Tale of Logic has inspire me to drink water aqua. Thanks ??????
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I enjoyed the book! the book has different plot from what I have read here...I read the first few chapters n I love the plot of the book...the writer has done a great job!
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Beautifully written, the story itself is new from what I've read. A great storyline so far and the use of words are perfectly aligned. This book has great potential, definitely worth a vote.
Great book with an intriguing plot and excellent grammar and spelling.Just needs more chapters lol. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller