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I don’t know why the more i read more i feel annoying about the story development. I’m dropping This novel.????????????????
So far I am liking what I am seeing. I don't mind that the action hasn't started right off the bat. It has got me hooked I just hope that this will not turn into a harem.
Feels like a sketch and not a story, idea 5/5, execution 2/5. Feels like a sitcom. Passed me a quick few hours reading through the available chapters.Protagonist could kill high level assassins with a wail when he was just born on chapter 1 but was absolutely "useless" for the next 35~ chapters.This story feels more like a release of frustration through writing than a properly thought through novel.
Need more ch ... they will drop book ........ dont want that .......................... keep going plz ch ...........nine................................
Ohhohohohohoho~!!!!Is This Majesty The First One to review this Novel? Then This Majesty will not stand on ceremony and take this Honor to Give All Big Five Stars for this soon-to-be a Masterpiece typed by His Highness Ero-Saint!!!!
One of the best comedy.. no.. The best comedy that i’ve read so far in my life that I forgot to sleep and skip meal throughout the day. Thanks author!!???
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this is pretty much food wars fanfic with locked chapter at that lol...
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I see people giving it a bad rating and I feel bad because I love this story there is amazing character development the authors wrighting improves although the beginning is a little meh it gets a whole lot better and that whole meh part just becomes character development although I was look for a different type of story this completely surprised me and I love it during the beginning it might seem like the mc was wasting his time later in the story the skill that he got during that time are not very visible but important to the story and the character it's slow pasted but every chapter and event bring more understanding to the world around and the characters the mc does start with only 2 people on his side that slowly changes it's part of the slow pasted and it not like he magically get more people on his side he has to talk and create friendship or his original 2 I do think the title fits as not only do I think that we are only seeing the beginning of what the system can do I also think that there is no other title that fits this story I hope people see this review and don't worry about the bad reviews and get at least 100 in that is definitely when you have seen its charm the bad reviews are probably people from the beginning chapters and didn't really get into the real story
around 50 chapter in and not much sign of harem (2 potential were even deflected). this is really good and but it look like it lack popularity. the synopsis honestly sound generic although i admit that i can't think any better. the conflict is well thought out without using those brain dead cliches villain (no father, grandfather, elder, and ancestors coming to get you). there is no system, power mostly come from pure godlike talent and hardwork.
