Some chapter are like X happend then next chapter they do X again but change the place, how people meet etc. Like author had 2 ideas but forget about it. Nobody ever proof read it and its awful.some chapters are in the wrong order.That kind of poor work is becoming more and more popular on webnovel.......Its sad cause master/disciple are one 9f my fav stuff
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OK storyline. Funny moments, but too many filler chapters. The moment any significant occurrence develops in the plot, each chapter is stretched about six times its length with pointless nothingness. You can literally skip 5 chapters and miss NOTHING, or condense what it says into 3 or 4 paragraphs. The author is destroying his own novel like this
Although the theme itself is quite generic and getting overused from what I've read so far it's honestly pretty interesting and refreshing.MC for once isn't hiding his talents and although some of the parts that I've read are a bit cringe overall I was pretty satisfied from what I read. if the author maintains this level this could definitely be a great novel!Definitely pick this web novel!
May only have 11 chapters right now but it has already hooked me hope the story remains this level of interesting.
One of my most favorite novel... ^-^),The story is well done, everyday reading for each chapter is enjoyable.. goodluck and thank you for translating..
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It's a good read, it starts off a bit rough but quickly improves and soon became one of my favorite novels at the moment. MC is pretty much a stone cold killer at times, but also can play a loving father. As an aside, the world has an interesting mix of technology and magic, or more importantly technology fueled by magic such as cars which take magic energy as fuel instead of gasoline or some alternative liquid fuel.
it started innocently BUT, the author is constantly forcing his ***ist, racist, xenophobic, close-minded, hypocritical, immature, utilitarian & borderline-rapist ideologies. little by little in an escalating fashion, it's almost like he is trying to desensitize the readers into considering such things as normal..I wouldn't be surprised if he comes out and says that this is an ultra-nationalist (misguided), ultra-left-wing, ultra (typically Chinese (communist-gov.) fashion = borderline human rights violating) propaganda book. . in his defense, he could be an extremely good-hearted person, who is trying to make a happy honest living by selling books & living a life that's the complete opposite of M.C., and the only reason he is writing like this because of his readers who want these kinds of content pushed him into this nesh of perverse self-fulfillment. & he simply could not write in different fashion without losing a majority of his audience & a majority of his income along with it. ☺, but if that's not the case, he is no different from the "perverse, ***ist, misogynistic" author of "great demon king." the bastard tries to give F*CKED UP life advice every chance he has. . P.S. his hate for Japanese "politicians" can "somewhat" be rationalized to an extent. based on history & how they still refuse to acknowledge that & constantly play the victim. [most Japanese people don't even know what the Nanjing massacre is, because as propaganda they completely buried the facts and erased all related data from textbooks ]. . but all that backfires on the author due to the bullshit reasons he gives for hating the Koreans, who the fu*k reasons like that!!!!! ??????
I like it so far and keep it up I think this can turn into a amazing novel. Good good good good good good good good good goood good good Good good good good good good good good good goood good good Good good good good good good good good good goood good good
Watched this chinese drama on tv with the English subtitles and I think the book is better... ????????????????????????