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I chose to give one star because I find the premise to be offensive. Such flights of fantasy that portray women as "things" to be taken advantage of is... not something I enjoy reading. I hope others will not read this trash to show that it's not wanted.
This novel is free, this novel is good, judging by the other reviews the publisher has some character. Even if this never becomes popular it does deserve to be a cult style hit. The high rating is deserved in my eyes I hope this author can do similar things I’ll definitely be a fan.
Well done! Very nice plot, and good grammar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Both book by the authors has a good premise, but have been so poorly executed you want to puke. It really is a shame for a good idea.MC is retarded, but the world is much more retarded to highlight his amazingness.Early is not so bad. As you usually cant expect much deep plot in webnovel.But in ch. 30 ish.He log into the game which require him to be unconscious in a possible enemy's car. For no fking urgency whatsoever. He went that far just to show how retarded he is to the reader.dropped.Translator did a good work though. But its better to pick another title.
This novel has a rating of 9.2 with 1000's of votes that is a damn high rating. This kind of rating is given to novels like "Lord of Mysteries". But it's from 2013 so you can't trust it. Most of the novel of that time has quite high ratings while not being that good.
I read up to chapter 40 and what I can say is that there are very absurd elements in this novel. The event that leaves Mc paraplegic can easily be described as an assassination attempt and the consequences for the villain who did it are not discussed later. The Mc doesn't know about the game's existence when he gets his virtual helmet, and the sister who has taken care of him for 4 years (who is also a player) is another item without explanation. The possibility of bringing something from the game to the real world (and the Mc not knowing the game) leaves me perplexed. The Mc is unable to join the game for 2 days to escape problems and his not doing ANY research on the rules of the game during this period is proof of his foolishness. I'm honestly going to drop this novel because this level of nonsense is too big for me.Translated by GT
Night Ranger is a reasonably competent tranmigration into a game world that is actually real. The best part of the story is easily the vivid combat scenes, which relies on a MMORPG sensibility to drive the action. The fast pacing and excellent translation make at times, this novel can be enjoyable, but unfortunately, the world is inescapably shallow, which even at the best of times prevents the novel from ever being truly great, and at the worst of times, drives the novel into frustrating places.The world is just like the game he played, except when it's not. The main character remembers everything about the game down to the fiddliest bit, except when it's convenient for him not to. The system seems in-depth, but ultimately is obviously contrived around the main character like his subclass which would make no sense as a main class. Skills that would be obviously stupid in a game are purported to have existed in the game, such as a near-instakill skill that makes the user weak for months. There are niggling details when the author tries to bring in plots into a video game world. The MC's father was murdered by a slow poisoning. Here's the problem: In this world, you can fairly trivially cast "Cure Poison" and "Divination". Over the months he was slowly getting sicker, why didn't his father visit a cleric? And after discovering he was being poisoned, it would have been trivial to find the culprit. I'm a hundred chapters in, and every single character introduced so far feels like a sock puppet for the MC to interact with. Nobody feels real, they're all just NPCs waiting around for the MC to show up. The villains, in particular, have all these contrived plans that involve trying to kill the MC, but they often seem pointless. For example, one mastermind spends an enormous amount of money plotting to kill the MC because he has a treasure map onto his land. I can't help but wonder why he simply didn't take a small adventuring party there and simply take it. We keep being told how smart the MC's actions are, but it's clear that without plot armor, he'd die pretty much every other day. He consistently, repeatedly putting himself in mortal danger time and time again, by choice. Yet there's never any sense of danger at all because the MC is a cocky perfect hero because he's played a lot of video games. He's never afraid of death even when he's inches from it, and even though we're told he feels pain, it doesn't seem that way. There is an incredible amount of telling instead of showing. Worse, people know things they shouldn't. The MC concludes that other people don't gain experience for getting kills, but he literally just assumes that without any testing whatsoever. Some mook knows instantly the incredibly rare class of the MC (literally only 18 other people in the world with the class), but then a far more powerful, older, guy with far more access to knowledge has no idea what he is like two chapters later. For some bizzarre reason, despite seers with future sight knowing a world-shaking calamity is coming, they forget to tell anyone.The MC has a cross between xianxia and video game morals. One second he's thoughtlessly murdering mooks, the next he's sparing somebody who's betrayed him. Why? Because they're plot-centric. The MC keeps saying he doesn't kill pointlessly, but he does. All the time. Then the author tries to show him as ruthless, but it mostly just makes him evil and possibly insane. The MC looks at somebody and senses that they have strange eyes, so he kills them. Then he kills some peasant for giving him lip. Well, maybe they weren't a peasant, maybe he was a spy. Who knows? Not like the MC is going to bother to check when he mysteriously just knows. When it comes down to it, the MC sees people as bags of experience and loot. When his class trainer says "Okay, for the next step in your training, I need you to murder these five thieves that are pretty annoying because uh, they'll show off your night murdering skills" he doesn't stop and think "wait, is pick-pocketing really a capital crime?" Nope, he's got a quest to kill 5 people, so he kills 5 people. Amusing, since he later gets ragingly mad at someone else who is killing people to fulfill their advancement. I'm often frustrated by MCs that try to bring in modern world morality into brutish and violent worlds, but in this case, the MC shows less regard for human life than serial killers. His kill counts exceed that of most of the villains in the story, and include innocents, guards, and children. Bizzarrely, every day citizens expect him to be punished because in civilization there's clearly rule of law, but he routinely gets away with murder. You might say, "Might Makes Right
I don't know what they meant by generic kill fest, but this one got cruel people in a cruel world. The MC will become a powerful killing machine, but it's not like killing insects every time. He's strong, but he still struggles--also not arrogant at all. This book also got comedy and romance. Not a full package, but good enough to satisfy my tastes.
I will take a Leap of Faith and rate 5 starz. I expect great think cuz it kinda reminds me of arifuta somethin somethin where the MC is betrayed and becomes badass it would be cool if his hair is or turns white just sayin.
This book has great potential with an interesting storyline as I will imagine that we will see the history of the main character played out through the sales of his wares.The current update frequency is insane with one chapter a day while still maintaining a good writing quality. That's all that can be said right now with how little has been written however I look forward to the next few chapters. The redundancy of a system being non-physical seems a bit much but that's just me being a bit nitpicky.Side note - First time rating a novel.