Shameless author review here. I’ve poured a lot of effort into this story, the world, and its characters. I’m really glad to have people read it and share their opinions. It’s too early to talk much about the quality of the novel since there are only 6 chapters as of the time I’m writing this. However, I can assure you that this is a very active experienced, this novel. I will constantly tweak old chapters and update the novel. I plan to spend many months working on it. I hope you’re ready for this journey. Usually I would review my own novel, talking about the story but for this novel you really just need to read it.
"Calm down it's alright. I honestly didn't mean to scare you. My name is Keres whats yours?" Keres helped the group get up. The trio were surprised that Keres was friendly and not mad at them. They introduced themselves. Keres noticed that the young woman known as June blushed when she looked at him. And couldn't help but thought 'I'm just that handsome hehe'.
have not yet understood the background story of atticus. but other than that I fully enjoy the characters and the interaction. hilarious
This is a great Novel with a good plot with an amazing world background. The only thing is that needs to be improved in this novel is the writing quality which I will give a few suggestions. There are many grammatical mistakes such as mixing the genders, mixing the past tense and present tense, mixing the point of view of the 1st person and 3rd person, and finally there are a few areas where the wording could be more clear and concise. If you are reading this review, please keep reading! These are mistakes that could be overlooked due to how great this novel has developed!
I like it so far ............................................................................................................................................................
Waaahhhh~ This novel is so top-notch that I need to gift this review!! Wuwuwu...I understand your main focus is on the other novel but pls update a little more frequently if you can! I've already read all the chapters as of now and I'm dying to read more...(>~<)/
I just want to say i love your book????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Whilst this may be a little biased it is a piece of work that I thoroughly enjoy making and I hope everyone else who reads this will find as much fun and entertainment as I do creating this masterpiece and find it hard to express it through words (last bit too over the top?...) XD
Every story that comes in my way makes me feel the heartache! I tried watching and reading this kind of dramas, and I'm so in love with how it goes, and I technically cried in every single line! In this novel, you might want to check this heavy drama coming in your way! ? HIGHLY RECOMMENEDED❤
This is such an amazing story with a beautiful plot. I hope it gets the recognition it deserves! The characters are relatable and the diction is epic.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover PublishHey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7or contact [email protected]
Intreaging idea but too generic, but you can fix that by making your novel like a movie if you can structure it in a way it would make it interesting and attractive you will make whatever your trying to make great if not better. (For example watch some movies about the subject your going for)