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The story has great potential. The synopsis might need a little bit of editing. There are few minor typo mistakes (like instead of 'you are' or 'you're', I saw 'your' was written). Still, it is a great effort and the character development is good! Cheers to the author!!
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 31/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 37)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A dark novel with a ruthless mc who loves to tortures only those who are criminals.long review: pros: 1) A completely original story. By original i meant the concept is original. And even if there are something similar to this, to me this is the first time I read something like this.2) This is a dark novel. Brutal and cruel. Mc ruthlessly tortures people and author describes it. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro, coz i was bored of fluffy novels)3) The only thing mentioned in this novel till now is how mc enjoys Ruthlessly torturing & killing criminals. Yeah no romance, no fantasy... Wait this might be a fantasy given system and all but yeah thats pretty much it... But then again this is interesting.4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. When break is needed from all those tortures you get a break, when you need to see the tortured ones, they are tortured.5) I love how the author mentions the user comments. That's a plus from me. Except for mc everyone has conversations.cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this is a dark novel. For people who love light hearted novel... Yeah don't even dare to read this one lol (This depends person to person, for me a pro)2) Zero character depth. The mc is not explained. Mc shows no emotions rather just a cold expression. Heck how the mc looks we don't even know. Same with other characters, they are introduced only for filling spots. 3) updates, this novel is inconsistent in updates at least till now it is. Only 24 chapters has been released till now but i guess ch/day may remain inconsistent even in the future coz one day its 5chaps while there is only 2 next day and then next day there is none.4) world building sucks. Nothing is explained. How the mc arrived in this world. Scratch that, we don't even know if this is original earth or a parallel one. I mean what we know is only from synopsis. Where he got system from, what is system, and everything else nothing about the world is mentioned.5)Little to no character interaction. Almost no conversations. Literally MC has almost no conversations. Even for a loner mc this is a bit too much.6) Idk if it's the author or TL but there are few mistakes... These mistakes can't be overlooked, for ex *SPOILER*A victim's tongue was cut by MC's methods, but he was still speaking (literally said roaring) with mc...IMO:- More conversations with MC &- a little bit of MC's background reveal will be appreciated.... But then again only 30+ chaps are revealed.RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-6)update: 78/10 (con-3)plot: 7.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1&4) characters: 7.5/10 (con-2)pacing: 8/10 (pro-4)dialogues: 8/10 (con-5)entertainment: 10/10OVERALL: 4/5 Conclusion:This novel has excellent potential! A dark and brutal mc who enjoys torturing. I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Next review after chap 100WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC may seem evil, but he is an anti- hero, though me may act evil in the future...- mc is very calculative. And he has never failed till date.
This narration style seems very realistic and it feels as if Dexter is sitting right in front of me telling me his story.The plotline is quite intriguing. I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapters to unfold. Good job mister author!
So, here is my review after going through the latest chapters, which is ten I guess.This review won't spoil you, as I am not here to fix the mistakes, but just let you know what it hasThe story is not the best I have ever seen, but with enough focus, you can understand what's going on.The writting quality is again not perfect, but far better than the average, but author tends to use some uncommon words, which with enough banging will be clear.Character are good, and have some depth which is good as far as what I aim for.Update stability is the worst feature of WN, and I never understood the point of the feature. Since the book is on a contest, author would pump out chapters daily, and may get stressed, so Author can take a rest if the quality is good. Not everyone runs after quantity. In the long run, the later winns I guess.World Background was the one of the fee things I am very strict nwith, and thus book, not till the chapter satisfied my desire for world building.Ah... Here I go, fixing errors, wasting both my and my brain cells, but if it did help, then it's good for me
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