Full attributes martial arts. it has the same mc and starting chaps. this novel is actually really good and enjoyable if its wctually this tho so heck yea
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I love this book. It has very unique story line. I hope more chapters will be released very soon because I can't wait to find out what will next.
Overall good concept and nice interaction between characters.
But, plot progression is really slow. A lot of unnecessary chapters which you could skip and not miss anything. A lot of details which feel just the same but with different words.
This is a nice read! Lol im glad you went for a different spin on the isekai genre instead of the typical truck-san...... tho truck-san still would have been hilarious. the book al together is captiVating. good job!
Author Here!
I`m just a beginner author so forgive me if there is noticeable grammar mistakes, I`m still working on it.
Please provide me with constructive criticism.
In fact there's a better version of this novel out there. Called "Mistakenly entered the Interrogation room" when the newbie cop cracks a high level case. So many gems out there but I wish there was a way to be more organized... Sigh. Now I gotta write down every novel I see and If I like it. It's harder then it sounds, since not all CNs are on WN but also NU.
This seems pretty cool. Never seen a system like this before at least.
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From chapter 206 this story just isn't fun anymore. Until the 'Faith energy' arc, the protagonist was respectable. He was multi-dimensional; he wasn't a two-dimensional puppet defined by one word (like 'righteous' or 'shameless'). Instead the protagonist was many things: cunning, strategic, patient, utilitarian and capable.
Yet this all disappears in chapter 206 when the author quite literally squishes, and remoulds the protagonist's personality so he better fits into the themes of 'justice', 'positive karma', and 'righteousness.' The author goes as far as to hypocritically rebrand every single one of the MC's actions so far, justifying them under the banner of 'good' vs 'evil'.
This story was never superb, but it was entertaining. Now the hypocrisy is just down-right sickening.
wanted to like it but the math was off, details changed randomly, and then it got racist. so I'm okay, thanks.
maybe without the "stereotypes" scattered throughout i would stuck with it.
I love this book and the fact that the author tries to write a chapter a day at the least. Anyone else rooting for Golden Queen to enter the harem???
So many things done wrong that it's not even funny.
9 Chapters were all I could handle of this "literary masterpiece".
Generic antagonist whose sole purpose is to spout lines just to see what makes you cringe the hardest.
Generic pretty independent love interest who needs to be saved by MC at every turn despite being hailed as a great prodigy.
Generic Mentally handicapped MC who does not understand the world he is or what an economy of product is, Sells top quality products for pennies while complaining about how broke he is, Gets walked over by just about everyone in the novel, becomes a simp when interacting with a girls.
The idea of the book was quite interesting unfortunately execution leaves much to be desired.