Man as far as webnovels about realms that aren’t necessarily a secret but like not exactly known about either, it’s like more of a secret. Yeah, as far as webnovels abt secret realms go, this one is a good cool solid read. Very cool, ty.
The concept is great. Unfortunately, the protagonist is both short-sighted and shallow. After finding out he has the power to not only digitalise (able to enter any software as a digital life form) but also to materialise anything from within to the real world...he decides to open a wholesale vegetable business. Not only is this subpar idea, but he's putting himself at risk - no sourcing, no transaction evidence, no storage...he has nothing to explain how he obtained his veggies. He just asks clients of his to 'promise not ask him.' Oh god.
As for the MCs shallowness - he uses his powers to stroke his ego by acting the hero, to casually slap faces and of course can't forget wooing 'beauties.' Sigh...
The plot is just okay, from the first chapter it's kind of somehow but as it goes it gets interesting...
Do not get discouraged that u don't understand what it's all about in the first chapter, just continue and you'll understand.
Good job author
Noice
what can i say? we know what we came to read and we get it. putting that aside the world that is being built has my interest as well for its uniqueness.
Raw?
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Well the story seems to be good but the grammar sucks. The most frustrating thing is that most of these errors can be resolved by just a simple review before posting. Hope the author corrects this.
The mc is as bland as it gets.The story is mediocre at best.I wouldn't say it's bad but it's not good either.I won't read it because the mc is going all in on defense even though he doesn't really need to. (like no weapon but only a shield if he level ups all points are put in constitution).All in all i don't really enjoy this novel
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This book is really amazing ..Totally love the cool title, The wonderful plot and it amazing characters ??What a really nice good book to read