Bro the starting is really nice and it's getting interesting too, waiting for next chapter.
Bueno, es bastante fascinante con esas emociones y giros extraños que dan. Además es algo muy perverso algunas cosas, me tiene enganchado y espero tus fics los actualices
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It has be good so far I really like it!!!!!????????
I've already added it to my list after reading the first three chapters.I like the way you twisted the tropes.The writing style is smooth and easy on the eye, nothing wrong with other than few punctuations mistakes that I noticed. The descriptions were vivid and easy to understand bringing the colour to the writing.My only advise is that- dark humour is quite hard to write, if you wrote something wrong it might hurt someone's feelings so be keep that in mind.Overall it's a goodread, I was reminded of konosuba reading it.
Everything is awesome and i would give 5 stars but stability of updating: 3/5. You need mroe chapters if you want readears to stay with your novel. About novel: Mc is good, but i dont understand everything about him yet; this tutorial is good start but if he stay there for about 50 chapters then 'i will find you, and i will kill you'. Thanks for your work XD
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I really like the book so much. The storyline is awesome. I'm so in love with the characters that it made me come here, on this platform. I love how the author has planned things out. The story is narrated in detail through flashback. The blurb clearly denotes it's a mystery book. The mystery is maintained throughout the sub-plots (disowned subplot and the marriage life in Germany subplot)and not even a single hint is given to the readers which keeps the readers excited and enticed.
wow!!!what a novel! Your plot is simply wonderful. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more.clap for your author.keep up the good work.I would keep reading.
With 50 free chapters released and more steadily on their way, now is a good time to write a first review – one I will gladly come back to upon this work's conclusion sometime in the future.This is the third work in the author’s collection, one completed and one on hiatus, and the experience clearly shows. The author has continued to fine-tune their craft while leaving their core style clearly identifiable, and I am very excited to see how this story develops.The style is simple and succinct, though not lacking flair. Ease of reading and clarity aside, it lends itself particularly well to the expressive, larger-than-life dialogue, a prominent feature in the author’s works. The vivid and emotionally charged interactions of the characters play an incredibly active part in all aspects of writing, from characterization to world-building. It is a breath of fresh air in lieu of the swathes of grimdark and apathetic one-liners we readers are all too familiar with. The characters themselves live up to these expectations, their outlines clearly defined from the start, while leaving more than enough room for growth as the story develops. At the time of publication of this review, the main trio has been introduced and developed in great detail, yet sacrificing none of the mystery of unknown or untrustworthy character backgrounds. As the main powerhouse prepares for a wholesome exeunt, the two main protagonists, almost direct opposites of each other in all manner of ways, provide the author with a blank canvas to develop alongside the story’s progression. The world-building of the last fifty chapters provides a solid foundation for this approach, hitting all the right buttons. There’s intrigue, mysterious world politics, an innovative power system and enough enemies, hidden or otherwise, to keep the protagonists occupied for many story arcs to come. The power system especially is one I’m interested in learning more about. To avoid spoilers, it takes an unique three-pronged approach with some tasteful strategic terminology that leaves a lot of room for individuality. Unlike in many stories out there, the protagonists are not blessed with a completely unique class or unheard of element. Seemingly aiming to subvert this trope we instead have common building blocks, which will certainly build up to much more by virtue of characterization and originality, and not a fated bestowal of power because you happened to be in the right dungeon at the right time. The story is set up to be an epic progression fantasy, but with a twist best described as “out with the old and in with the new”, which you may have already picked up on. There are no issues with the grammar or linguistic quality of the writing, so the readers will have an unimpeded reading experience.I am rating it five stars for the quality so far and the great potential beyond, and would certainly recommend everyone to try it for themselves. If you are interested in well thought-out and slow power progression, lively characters, a methodically structured and intricate world, and an adventure story leaning more towards wholesome than dark, this is the book for you.