Its only the second light novel i've ever read. However if this kind of level is standard, then I have the feeling that light novel are gonna become part of my life.
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Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars! Here's what you can expect:The GoodThe story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal.Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent.Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel heheThe BadPacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work onNo romance...POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better.There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this tooAll in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!
The story is fresh and has an interesting plot, as the author I tried to put in dept in my characters, and the story line is one that is not common. I hope you guys checks it out and also live a review.
The plot is interesting, grammar and writing style is good too. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. ????????????????
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This book is just all around fantastic but I would really like if the author released a new chapter, but all and all the book is great the world is huge and interesting, the characters are actually intelligent most of the time and you can tell this book was thought out