Thoughts Before Sleep

Overall... The story is very food. I just have one very irritating problem...Alex is way too passive and a pushover. At first it comes off as very kind and humble, then it became pretty stupid, to annoying then very irritating. He has all that money and connections but can't even protect is girlfriend. He literally promised to her dying mother that he would do everything to protect her daughter. It would have been ok if all those tragedy only happens to him but no, debbie suffers the worst. Actually I was kinda relieved that Debbie escaped this sorry excuse of a man, then she would probably can live peacefully. I mean if he really loved Debbie he should have announced to the whole world the she is the future Mrs. Ambrose that way no one would dare to put their hand on her. I get that he would prefer not to be seduced by a bunch of gold diggers, and like to lay low, but if he truly loves Debbie he would endures those things for her... Just want to get my thoughts out of my head and find someone to rant.And for the Author...I know it is written like this for the sake of the further part of the story, but its just too much. Who would endure something like this if they have the ability to prevents those events from happening, especially seeing his significant other being tormented. At least put some little satisfying moments every now and then. And please just kill Cathy...

Honest reviews are here.. Sorry to the author, I try to read, but this novel is really not suitable with my taste.. Even though you explain on Ch0, "every mission has it reason behind it," I can't stand with the mission given by Janus system.. For example, "if you fail the mission, your sister die" or "if you fail the mission, you will die".. Even the rewards are ridiculous, you know why? When MC completes the mission, he gets a treasure box, but MC needs the key to open it.. To get a key, he needs to complete another mission.. The system mission will always be dangerous and threatening his life or other people's lives.. Even when MC succeeds, the sequence is MC will become an enemy with a powerful gangs/player.. EVERY mission that MC does will just make his life harder and harder.. No easy or normal standard level for MC.. Even Slash or Flame blast skills can be used 5 times per day..  So, if you love to see MC suffer hardship for THE WHOLE TIME (all chapter), this novel is for you.. I only read up to Ch50, but I can't take it anymore.. I feel like MC has been bullying and tortured by the author..

I am baffled how anyone likes this garbage, the characters are all flat and boring, everyone is stupid, the MCs plot armor is off the charts, he gets exactly what he needs whenever he needs it, no effort, thought or hardwork involved, if you really enjoy this childlike wish fufillment novel, you are the worst.MC: "i need more exp" Author: "Np here's a monster tide"

From time to time webnovel surprises me i think that's this is the most beta mc ever, then i will read another novel and what i tought to be the top beta will become some Giga chad in confront to the new and improved beta man ( in this case this novel).Soo where to start?This guy dies and is reincarnated in a world of magic. then dies again and is ressurected as an eternal slave. The little girl who kills him is like a name what do you need one to? from now on your name is zombie then in the next chapters he will be abused in all sorts of ways with insults beating and cutting of limbs. The mc? completly fine with it ( it seems that in the future he may also love her) he was a child when he was killed on the street, in daylight, his family forgotten by the killers ( they are nobles why should they care after all? )Later since the readers disliked the beta oh sorry the mc for being like: "Huh, so i am a slave? fine with me!" the author tried to patch it with an auxiliar chapter in which the beta will have his conscience rewritten by the system ( what whas the point on giving the mc a backstory since now he is no more than a husk?) so he can accept being a slave.this patch was worse tought at least to me ( slaves mc are a big no no, but forced rewritting of your conscience to be the perfect slave is an even bigger no no)*SLAPS NOVEL* This badboy contains so much beta energy that it can take a rocket to the moon and back

So no spoilers. This book so far as I have read which is to Chapter 20. I know it is not a lot the translation seems to be machined or the person who translate does not understand English needs to be edited bad. You can get the gist of what is going on. The overall story is not horrible but the MC plot armor is super thick everything just happens no build up or accident. I think it was suppose to be accidental but if so the author or translater all failed that. Otherwise I would at least give this a shot for the free chaps and if you like it keep going. For me till this thing is edited to make sense I am done.

This one does heavily remind me of the lord of mysterious, not that it’s bad in anyway, just  because there has been influences from know stories that I enjoy will make me want to read more of this.