Isn’t good until chapter 60-100. Fortunately at that point the main character decides who he wants to be, becomes intelligent, and the story rapidly gets better as you go on. The first 59-99 chapters are subpar but there is a great story if you can push through them.
This is pretty good so far. There are a few things that should be fixed like; you don’t need to write out ALL the stats some is fine, the interactions between people do not seem natural and the characters have not really been described so it’s hard to picture what they look like. The characters should really be described better, I usually see some sort of movie in my head of what is going on but in this book that doesn’t really happen.
