LucasDax169
I really like the plot of the whole story. Makes one want to continue reading... The character development is fun to read as well... Overall a good book
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I am writing this after reading through 7 chapters, so please take it with a pinch of salt. This is a very interesting concept, and it is quite funny for me to imagine Emperor Franz Josef with his bushy beard and conservatism, going on a different life trajectory than in reality. The translation is excellent, and I haven't personally had any problems with it. I haven't read far enough to be affected by stability of updates, so I've just put it at a 5 for now.The story is that of a random Chinese person being reincarnated into the body of Franz Joseph I, the second last Austrian Emperor (he died halfway through World War I, so his successor didn't exactly have a long reign). The reincarnation happens when he is still heir and not yet monarch, and the story is about his attempts to preserve and further the interests of, the Austrian empire.We have no idea why this reincarnation happened, and there is at least initially virtually no background development to the actual Chinese character as opposed to Franz Joseph. I am presuming that reincarnation was simply used by the author to give Franz Joseph a less reactionary personality and knowledge of the future. This nevertheless seems slightly *******ish. This *******ism is unfortunately further exposed by the author's lack of attempts to show the depth of relationships between Franz and the people around him, each relationship simply being shown in a mostly business-like context.Some of the actions of the character seems poor and unnecessary. An example of this is how he visits the prime minister Metternich without any warning, and waits several hours for him to come home, all to give a suggestion which is immediately shut down. The name he gives his newspaper (the necessity of which I also fail to see) also sounds more like a slogan than a name, although I presume it sounds better in Chinese.The author does show a more-than-decent understanding of the political and economic situation of Austria (soon-to-become Austria-Hungary) in this time period. Nevertheless, he also neglects utterly the significance of religion to the state and the people who lived in it, despite acknowledging briefly that Franz Joseph was a devout Catholic. Some time however is devoted to the subject of nationalism, which of course historically helped tear the empire apart.Ultimately I am still optimistic that I will enjoy this story, although I am afraid it will end up focusing too much entirely on politics and not on anything else. As a lover of history it does seem interesting to me to speculate on how the HRE could have been potentially restored, in a century of waning Austrian influence.
A really good original novel that you won’t regret giving a read. Writing Quality - Not much to say about this because there are rarely any obvious mistakes I can pickup on.Stability of Updates - There are regular updates (Though, there are never enough chapters when you really enjoy a story).Story Development - I like the current development of the story and you can tell the author is either well read or has done some research into the current specifics of the story. I would like to have a closer look at the actual system and the main uses of it for the MC, because at the moment the most important aspects I can think of are the map and crafting. It feels like he has been neglecting his responsibilities as a Lord in his own territories and I would like to see his making better use and giving a better look into the running of his current lands. With all the statistics available from the system I would think that he could create some medium long and easy to understand plans?Character Design - The character designs for the people that matter are well thought out. Even some side characters and the general attitudes of the nobles proves enlightening. The only thing that irritates me at times is the Main Character and his many tangents. Though, I suspect that is a design of the author on purpose. It just seems like the MC likes to jump from one thing to the next like an excited child and not being able to wait to show his efforts to all the people (Yet having nothing physical to show for that idea yet)World Background - The general lay of the world is proving to be well written. I’m not particularly well informed on polish geography and what has been established is well done, It would prove useful for the author to at some point once the MC has a stable land ownership to creat a map with the different colour coding to show who owns what (I find it helps with visualisation).Overal, a fantastic piece of work.
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love this book want to read more
love the chapter dear..... specially Kiara bonding with Anaya
more ...i want more of it...take care preggy...️...️
its very interesting to read
Just wish for once that there was a badass female lead that got to actually stay a badass throughout the entire book. Not wither away once she meets her mate for one reason or another while the mate gets to have like 0 shit happen to him
a good time killer now at this time of pandemic, thanks for very interesting novels
welcome back jdw! ' so excited for your new story..i will surely love it..thank you.
