The novel is fantastic, I love the novel??? it very interesting please author try and update more am anticipating your next update, getting excited??????
this is not really a review but its something that will improve ur writing if u want to use it but add a little more background information to make the sence more interesting and fun to read that goes for the characters to the girl she does not have a good disruption of her to much u cant clearly see her too much it's very faint but all in all it's a very good story to begin with I do suggest to add on to the story on the next chapters ^¥^ :)
I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.
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Truly a slow start but starts to get remarkably good around chapter 81 (Phase 70). Gets REALLY good around chapter 149 (phase 126, a lot of chapters have part 1,2 even 3, so numbering is different)
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Wow, i kind of liked Sou's personality. Though, i must say the world indeed is bit.. way too cruel. I feel sad, when he was all alone, blood drenched on his last breath. Humans shouldn't be too kind. I hope, he will become completely ruthless and merciless devil, who will avenge for his precious time, he wasted on those scums.I am with you, Sou. Fighting.
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a copy of Let Me Game in Peace but still for those who haven't read it and are bored, you guys can give this a try. anyways here's a gif of kronii
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Writing Quality - Translation quality noticeably worsened after ch 37 for some reason. So many commas are used in. place of periods. Terminology could also be betterStory Development - Seems standard so far. It seems to be heading into the parents are actually op with hidden background trope. Pacing is decent I guess.Character Design - MC is a logical person, treats demons realistically instead of just using the power of friendship. There's still no arrogant young master yet so that is a plus. Trash mobs are still present though.Updating Stability - We will see when and if it gets picked.World Background - Power system will probably be confusing to most. There is 3 seperate systems along with the bloodline: level, class, and grade in increasing importance and difficulty to improve. The geography and state of affairs has not been mentioned also, but it is still 60 chapters so it can be forgiven i guess.
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