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I...I don't know what to say of this novel....Unique I guess?Progression - MC --> Sick --> found item --> throw all logic out the window --> become sexy --> bang everyone --> pull money out of his ass --> play god --> Bang ant queen. This novel is the first novel I seen that makes absolutely no sense or has any direction direction. I have absolutely no clue how it is this high in the rankings or why so many people are giving power stones to this novel.I know that the site modifies the ratings on their premium novels. But this novel is just plain unreadable."Suspend your disbelief and you should find happiness". I tried but failed. I just could not continue with the non-sense anymore. The comments in the chapters were really funny and the only thing keeping me interested. that is it. I hope I don't read something like this again and alter some of my logic my brain has built up.
Cream of the crop. Well, at least for webnovel standards I would say. There aren't that many books that can compare to this one quality-wise.You should keep in mind that I only read the first five chapters, so I would advise you to just give it a try since you might find your new favorite book.^^The only thing bothering me is his spacing between paragraphs. But every author has a different opinion regarding that.^^
I am a new author l, and i really respect your dedication to comtinue uploading even though you have not gotten premium. The story is amazing btw. Keep it up hopefully u can get it to premium soon.
This seems like a solid novel. I like it very much, at least i like the first 40 chapters, i hope that webnovel will continue to poblish this novel!
Needs a lot of work before it can be called good. The sentences are barely readable, there's too much shifting between POVs and the pronouns character go by is never consistent. As for everything else, they're decent at best. The pacing is all over the place, the characters feel two dimensional and the romance is way too rushed.
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Story is fun and the mc (while op) doesn't feel too op, he gets the items/skills right before needing them but its incorporated in the story in a "good way".Disclaimer: You might (most likely) need to turn off your brains to read this and enjoy it to its fullest.Grammar is meh but it it improves in later chapters (or the mistakes are less obvious)
I love it!!!! I don't are about grammar it's amazing!!!!! They're so cute!!!? Argh 8 want a system!!!!? Fabulous, brillaint, fantastic. J'adore le book parce que c'est bien bien bien bien. Well done author!!!? You're so awesome!!!!
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Already read the previous novel and like it so much , sad that it was delete .hope there will be many improvement in this than the previous one . Good job & keep it up ?
So, how shall I put this, the story seems a bit bland due to the writing style. The story in itself is promising with a hard working transmigrated MC, and the difficulty leveling and growing in a real world fantasy. The growth progress is steady, with steady plot. There is some stereotypes but such is life.