A bit slow and kinda unclear but interesting...
I like to read on the computer, so my hours aren't counted, which is sad, but I truly appreciate this author! I definitely recommend reading it, mainly because of the world-building!
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It's quite early on but already looks promising. With daily updates I'm sure there will be enough chapters to binge read soon. Can't wait to read more.
Honest review. The author really knows how to tell a story. The character's conversation is not forceful and I loved it. Unique plot. I hope you'll be able to finish the book. I added it to my library to make sure I'm updated ❤️?
I'm just read 8 chapters and totally into this. Though that Pendragon one is an info dumb. Author did a lot of background research to make the story close to the facts. keep it up!!!!!!!
I'm not really familiar with or read stories for Male Audiences but this is one of the few that made me go '?' to '!'Since it's just a few chapters and yet to see anything,I'd be waiting for the other chapter for the world-building. As for the characters, character description would be most needed for better image of the whole world~Gambare, Author~
Not Read but i hope it will be better not like the grammar of the 1st review of the author................................................................140....................................................................
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It's a story about a western veteran reincarnating to a Chinese style cultivation world. So far the story organization is decent and the settings are quite refreshing.
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The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story.I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters.As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent.I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library.All the best,Author!