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I don't know if i am dimwit or this novel have some mysteries going in background because i don't fking understand why the FK i wasted my time on this novel . This novel is just out of my understanding.
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This book is an interesting and well researched writing. Blending two environments Online gaming and living society. two stories developing in one book. Addicted to this book, can't wait to check for updates daily
Traduction très approximative, vraiment à revoir. Toutefois le manga est absolument dantesque, de loin le meilleur que j'ai lu jusqu'ici.J'ai hâte de lire la suite
This is a greatstory, I really hope that they will continue to translate it. I hope that everyone will try to get them to continue with the translation also.
This story looks somewhat interesting. But I would have to read it before completely judging on whether it’s actually a good novel or not. I guess all that’s left is to wait huh... ahh waiting is such a pain in the butt. Oh well! Highly anticipating this story! :3 (as well as many others) I’ll probably leave a better review once this comes out though!
Hilariously addictive. Spirit Sword Mountain features an out-of-the-norm main character, who wants to cultivate inside the sect. However there are several twists, and they all come in very fun forms. The first arc is incredible and more than enough to get anyone hooked with this novel. Give it a try! It's super fun!
While this is a pretty good story and can be used to pass the time, the writer insists on throwing in rather cringey moments to try and force a laugh. On top of that, they ignore their own rules and set up the most ridiculous situations in order to push the plot forward. An enemy comes and fights against someone way stronger than him, and the enemy escapes anyway. Then they fight against someone an entire cultivation REALM ahead of them and still escape anyway. THEN they come across someone two cultivation realms ahead of them, and escape anyway. Then they come across an elder who is FIVE entire cultivation realms ahead of them, and by the grace of bad writing, escapes anyway. All of that ridiculous and impossible nonsense just to get the main character to act. And this is just one example. Half of the time the story is good, however, the other half it feels like the author is a mindless crayon eater.
Love this! Easily one of the better novels on here, despite the authors peculiarities (his obsession with one liners after long pauses) they have created a really solid world and nice reading experience. Overall it’s a very fun read and I am expecting it to get even better!Although i do have some complaints but they’re more about my preferences than the authors writing quality. The only technical thing I could say about this is that the author should be careful not to subconsciously or otherwise become consumed by the Chinese fiction way of writing, fellow cultiva- Ahem, anyways, some vibes I got were very manuah-y or whatever you’d call that spice. Its not an entirely technical complaint and also more of my preference but sudden vibe changes do ruin the pace and already built atmosphere of what you’ve got!Also I’d like to see how the waifus progress! Hopefully they do get an important role after their power ups and development. I’ve seen too many stories where the girls around the mc are immortals with one in a million years bodies only for it to become completely pointless and a waste of time because the Mc has become so much more stupidly powerful than them, where their progress might as well not even matter. Although so far you have done really well with them, and because of it i am even more invested in how they’ll become later on! I hope the Mc doesn’t lose the need to depend on their capabilities because so far you’ve done really well with it. I also like you writing more about the emotional and mental aspect of things and their relationships. (But perhaps you can hold back on those paragraphs of whatever the mc tries to do to sound wise and experienced? It’s probably one of the only things I actually found a bit hard to read so far.)Ah, also I gave about three stars because although the story is a good read it has the potential to be even better! Don’t rush and trust the process, it’s usually better that way! So many authors that get told their stories are good end up rushing things to get even more praise or whatever and ruin the good they had! But also don’t waste chapters please! Well, those date chapters were really nice though ??
Ngl I didn't expected much from this kind of premise but you did a good job delivering the story. Also tbth I think this one is better than your first book, you're improving and I, who has read both of your works, love to see you developing so great job.The characters' are still being introduced but I like Sam, he gives me Klaus vibes from the originals and I f'king love it! The world is being set up and you're doing a good job keeping your readers guessing.I don't have much to say about development right now but I think the story is heading somewhere, somewhere I would like to see so good luck writing.There aren't many villain stories. I mean there are story about bad guys, but not villains you know, the kind of people you'd love to read about but hate to meet in real life, Sam is that kind of villain. He calls his murder 'hunt', he talks to the dead body of people that he had killed. He is twisted in the head and I like it so good luck writing him.4.8 stars for now, I will recommend this to some of my friends too.
This is just average- no glaring flaws, typical tropes, nothing stands out. MC is a medical intern who suddenly gains a system, and completes tasks to earn system rewards. Coincidences pile up (like a doctor randomly calling on him, a sudden emergency, etc.) to help him accomplish the tasks. His surprising skill as a newb earns jealous glares from males and weak legs from females. All very stereotypical. The descriptions feel very off and unrealistic to me as I have worked in hospitals and social interactions do not really happen as described (for example, no doctor talks that much during a procedure and newbs are not called upon randomly like described because of both medical ethics and potential legal repercussions).