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"Brother," Uriel stood up with a wide smile on his face, "I… I'll back you up. I won't… die. We can't be called the Gemini if I do. Plus," He chuckled, "We promised Mallory that we'd be back for her, right?" He then backed away, activating his Void prowess and using it as a smoke screen.
For a familiar it was easy to find their master, so soon enough they arrived. August had said to Grisham that his apartment had turned into a cursed forest, but seeing and hearing were two different things. Albus had never imagined that cursed forests were this beautiful. They were always described as being awful and full with malice, forest spirits taking on vicious forms, but other than being silent and lacking animals or bugs, the cursed forest in August's apartment was majestic and felt like home despite it being the first time Albus went into it. It was odd to experience, but it made sense. This place was their master's domain, it would feel like home regardless of what it was like, but Albus sure felt grateful for it being like this.
"Did you forget that I am skilled in the art of needle? I do not need a man. Especially someone like you." She took a step forward. "Let's depart from here." Da Ying began to walk away. She didn't get far before he went in for a back hug. "Why? Why can't you open your heart to me?"
Instead, we roamed Shadow//NET where we fought, hacked, and stole to prove we were the best deckers in all of cyberspace. Usually, we would hack servers for data we could sell for credits. But sometimes, two or more deckers would have beefs with each other. Sometimes, even Shadow//NET would be shaken to its foundations. But there was a cabal of deckers who basically kept the chaos of the networks organized. If Public//NET was a downtown area, Shadow//NET was the underbelly. I usually came here to test my skills against other up and coming deckers to see who could copy data from the public servers and transfer the payloads first. However, this afternoon, I was after something more valuable than simple transaction histories and VR logs. I was after secure information on Libra Industries delivery schedules and personnel files.
"Little feng,this year all the clans of clear moon town will conduct coming of age ceremony in the martial hall.people from the 1st grade sect Will be coming to select disciples this time.so every one will have to participate in martial ground."
After entering, the murky light and lakeside sounds of the caldera town gave way to absolute darkness and silence. Exenoura's pupils dilated completely, but she could still not make out the grand entrance hall clearly. She quietly removed a luminescent mushroom from her bag. While she held it in one hand, her other hand glowed greenish-brown as she made a few simple runes in the air around the mushroom. The runes fell into the fungus, which seemingly absorbed them before growing vigorously. Exenoura then gently blew on the fungus, ejecting billions of spores into the damp air of the city hall.
I will give it a 4 for now until I get further development of the story. It scares me about how high some novels are at the start. But I will update this rating once we have 100+ chapters. But so far it looks promising.
wonderful write more pleaseeee!! the plots going really great
At first I consider this novel rather woeful. The author has explained his language issues yet I cannot condone the fact that he didn’t attempt to utilise a proofreader for this novel to help correct grammar and the many spelling issues. I find that rather in poor taste and lazy. I am sure there could have been a few volunteers who could assisted in some way to let readers have a smooth experience.Ok got that off my chest. The novel itself is interesting and I must admit captivating. The genre introduced here is a favourite of mine and I do enjoy how it is coming across. I admit I have to interpret things on the fly as the delivery is painful, however I manage to struggle through satisfactorily to enjoy what I have read.All in all it is a decent novel, just really really fix the writing (isn’t there programs out there that can assist, think Grammarly or the like is out there) and I suggest editing the earlier chapters. People haven’t got the patience to try and interpret what is being written if it isn’t clear enough.
I actually read this when it was on kindle imagine my surprise when I see it here.It’s always nice to see a ntr story so 5 stars for that and I genuinely like the writing and characters hope to see more and don’t listen to the hate, people can like what they want (unless it’s illegal) so take my stones cause I forget to use them
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