A good story, just wish that the MC would open a shop, a auction house or something like that. With his special products, it would be perfect for him to be a "merchant"
This novel is so terrible, I don’t even know where I should start. Some reviews have mentioned the terrible translation. That’s definitely true. However, I don’t think the story would improve much even if Webnovel hired a real translator. Yes, the story is that bad. The pacing is all over the place. Important details are left out that makes the story confusing. It reads like the author has a lot of ideas but doesn’t understand the first thing about writing a story.
This is another beautiful piece of work. I like the way you interpret the characters. You have done a lot of work, well done...... well done.
Story a bit slow to start off, MC a bit of a bumbling idiot at the beginning but there is some progress later. Not a story for those that expect a lot of killing happening.
So far I am having a great time reading this story and honestly hate waiting for the updates.*sigh* I wish some of these fan-fics have over 200 chapters sometimes, but anyways the story is good so far and I like the characters, especially the MC. The story development is going good, and I have no complaints.. (except for the updates . . . . .)
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bad story telling and world building but concept is good I feel bored j f dd d f f d
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this a utterly super posionus garbage ?️ 1 doesn't follow even the basic logics like every action has a equal and opposite reaction 2 writer is writing a novel everything centred around human body yet doesn't know jacksh it about human body 3 super in consistent like says something in one para yet a para below say the totally opposite 4 everything is just super vague last this not a novelthis is more the first most draft of a novel where everything is vague with ton618 size plot holes written as timeline reference for the proper novel this enough to say how trash this isadvice either don't read this trash or shutdown the logical and rational thinking part of your brain before reading or else u might deplete all of your surviving brain cells
It was good for a while until it was shown that they unconditionally believed that guy (adventurer guy. Not the MC) no matter what. Which was rather infuriating to read. The only reason that was stated for this was that he was young and the other guy was good at exploring. As the MC was on the team they should have given him the benefit of the doubt atleast. Except for that its pretty good. I hope this arc ends soon though its been going on for a while.
Something is wrong with the privlage system so I'll new chapters are not able to be seen I still see the chapter count rising but maybe they don't know what is happening