Very inconsistent unrealistic reactionsBook is more a like a blabbering all around the place seems like written by someone way young to write or express the thought process
couldn't continue after chapter 16, its all about sucking milking and cuddling, not for me.
Hello everyone! Thanks for your support so far. I will try to give my best with this book and also I will try to update as much as possible. If there is anything that you point out abou the story or character design or any other things, please let me know. One last thing, I still need to edit some chapters , I will try to edit them as soon as possible.
this is the best review i can makeODI’S NUTS.
Hello, Author here This is just to clear a few things first of allThe two main characters John and James have new blades which can take the form of any tool they desire as well as the colour of it depends on their emotions so John's is black cause he HIDES his emotion while James's is white because he shows too many emotions
This book is definitely a must Read! the plot is interesting you'll relate to the characters, the author is very detailed about everything, update more please! I'm cheering you on!
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This is awesome.story i really like mysteries. All of is haves secrets and it was interesting to know and to read such kind of genre. This is different from others stories.. looking forward to this author
Well everything's fine for me but it would be better if you can makes him/her less of an airhead. Great job, please keep up the work!Thank you for your hard work.