Second shameless review!!After writing more than a hundred chapters and being contracted, I felt I should do a review and say what I think about the book.Q. Will there be a harem?A. I have added multiple female leads to the story now and they all have things going on in their lives. Sophia and Marigold are traumatised and Kivela is trying to find her place in the world. Osmond also is rather young now, so I don't know. Q. Is the book dark?A. Yes it is. I have given warnings at the beginning of dark chapters.Q. Will there be a system?A. I have not added the tag because the story as of now, doesn't have a system. But I am planning to bring a character with a reincarnated character with a system in the future, so I guess I should add those tags.Q. Writing quality?A. I am a writer who has just started. English is not my first language. I am improving every day and with every word I write. And with that, I also have found out that my initial chapters are bad compared to the latest ones. So I am planning to go back and edit the whole thing once volume one is completed. Q. When will volume one be completed then?A. It's in the last arc now. I am planning to write five volumes for this book if everything works accordingly.Q. Chapter update?A. I try to update one chapter a day. I am currently writing with my mobile and it is a hastle.And finally, thank you for reading my book. You can give ratings, reviews, power stones and gifts to show your support and love.
Pancakeswitch got the best stories with great plots.... Here is another of her books. I'm so intrigued to read and join the adventure. A ghost with a system. sound interesting.I recommend to you all, it'll be worth your time.
This is a very good book, come on guys add it to your collection and vote!!!!
Good novel i liked it, no special reason just did
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Interessante o desenvolvimento dessa história, gostei bastante da introdução e de como as coisas funcionam. É básico e simples algo que cativa a leituraEspero que consiga melhorar cada vez mais e torço pela vitória no concurso U.u
If you have had a bad day, are thoroughly annoyed with someone or something, or possibly just want to read a great book, then this is the novel for you. The book is great about murder gratification. Person bothers the mc? Not for long.This book brings a fresh look in the 'new world' genre and I am very much looking forward to see where this novel leads, or at least how it gets there!
I tell you this narration is different from what you are used to reading from various novels, it is of a different natureThe hero of the story is distinguished, exciting events, summit in surprises, a strange but alien way of narration, it is distinguished by its natureI suggest you to follow this story or you will regret it too muchI have read this novel up to Chapter 500 and I put it in the list of 3 best novels I've read in my life
I love this so much and I’m surprised I haven’t written a review for this yet. There might be a few grammar problems like capalization for names but that can be overlooked. The plot has been progressing at a good place in my opinion so far. The world is unique and there’s just so much we haven’t seen yet! The characters are cute in their own way and although we haven’t seen a ton of their facets and stuff, I still love them! I’m so excited when we get more chapters as the author is a bit busy with irl stuff so there aren’t too many chapters, but the potential of this novel keeps me here. Thanks for all the hard work author! I hope everything is going well for you!
I’ll try to make this quick.Takes place in modern China. MC’s goddess of a sister wants to become a superstar. Qin Ze, a mediocre student overshadowed by his sister, obtains a system that allows him to receive points through missions and pay for learning skills instantly.If I were to compare this to another novel, that would be I Am A Prodigy. He’s not as OP in learning skills, but the way he uses his skills in different situations is very similar. And also, the face smacking with those skills.A large feature though is his sister. Much of the story so far has tons of banter between him and his sister but I’m not a big fan.His sister is a peerless beauty with a alluring body. And the author doesn’t forget to mention that every time she appears. They also make it a point that they might not be biologically related in the opening chapters. But that’s not the biggest problem I have. The problem is her personality and how she acts. She’s extremely lazy and forces Qin Ze to do chores, cook food, accept her demands, and more. She’s pretty unreasonable and selfish and Qin Ze just accepts it. She orders him around like a servant. He doesn’t always take it but does most of the time because of the way they were brought up. She is 25 and he is 22 btw. I could continue describing my dislike of her but I’ll stop it here.The chapters are pretty long which is good but I feel events are dragged on for longer than they should. A basketball game? Make it 4-5 chapters and make sure the netizens are just dumping on the MC until the end.And although you think the story focuses on helping his sister become a superstar, that becomes more of a side show. We mostly see Qin Ze get missions, learn skills, and banter with people. Then sprinkle in some developments about the superstar stuff. It’s more about turning the MC into a not so mediocre person.Translation was pretty good. Didn’t spot many mistakes.Probably won’t keep reading.
This is a great story. Keep it up!P.S> How do you come up with eastern names? I'm trying to figure out names for my novel.Thank you.
letting us see the character develop and grow stronger is actually pretty good I like the fact that he's growing and exploring all of his possibilities I guess