I had hope, but that hope got dashed pretty quickly. Very disappointing. Well, time to find another novel, .
I haven't done a review in a while but this definitely deserves one. Everything from the memories to the character growth is wonderfully done. Btw author, if you are reading this then I suggest you post this story in royalroadlegends and scribblehub as your type of writing fits there more than webnovel
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Mystrous and Interesting ?, waiting the upcoming chapters, I liked the way that you described the feelings and the dialogue between the characters was interesting, greetings to the author ?
This novel started off really well, even the world and character building is pretty good. After he went to the five element world the second time, this novel's down fall started. The amount fillers is insane, it put even MGA to shame. This is the first novel I have read where the MC is still stuck in the impoverished starting place even at chapter 600. MC faces no setbacks for his idiotic decisions. I think his life spirit should have died when it got kidnapped to sparrows village. Certain places the MC should be there and not in training like during the mercenary guild meeting all the powers. Author needs to improve his creativity. Currently this novel is mediocre at best and will frustrate you most of the time. Only time will tell if it gets back to its best.
this is my thought on this novel after reading up to 48 chaptersi will be dead honest, this is a novel that i must say.. a hidden gem with extremely big potential to grow with good marketings. It has nice story, good and normal pace plot development, and good character development. I prefer you to put the power level in this world as we still don't know how does one determine their strength. I wish you will have these in the future but anyway its a good novel for me to spend my money onbut at the same time, this novel have something that might make veteran readers burst into anger. First of all, although i said the character development is good, the way you write it out can piss people off. I almost threw my phone out of anger reading the first 40 chapter. Yes you want to make MC a naive dumb boy but smart i can accept that, but you exaggerate it. You make him look like a beta japanese male weeb in japan. I suggest you need to fastened his maturity progression in the next 10 chapters or veteran readers will immediately drop this novel. Also about Aleshia, just like I said, u exaggerate it. You make her way too paranoid and this will leave reader a bad taste in their mouth regarding her. Its nice to see a proper relationship progression over his maids one by one as to make the story longer and interesting but dont make it too out of line that it disrespect MC dignity as a noble. Also he is not giving any punishment at all. I would like to see all his maids total obedience to him Also for future readers.. i suggest you all to fast read chapter 1 to 40 as to avoid you leaving this novel.Trust me you will be eager to swipe your card past those chapters. Also trust me as long author not losing few screws in the head for future development, this novel will be a good workout for your slumbering dragon. I will give 4* at the moment because of the updates, character development and world background. I will give 5* after this have more chapters, clarification on power level and a better, brave and mature MC with his maids not being so paranoid. Best of luck. I have insulted and scolded a lot of authors in webnovel considering how they are so terrible making improvement in their novels. I have high expectation on this. Dont let me downMy ? on you
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Just the first few chapters and I am loving this novel ☺️. The storyline is intriguing. The diction on point.I recommend this novel to anyone who loves a good fantasy novel well spiced.
I'm absolutely addicted to this ongoing WebNovel! The author's writing is so descriptive that I feel like I'm right there in the story with the characters. The world-building is so well-crafted and the characters are so relatable that I'm emotionally invested in their journeys. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves an ongoing read!
Wow 3 of novels I put in library have been picked for trial read that's new just hope there as good as I think. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrreeeeeeeeeeerxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xpppppppppppppppppppp
is it possible for you to restart this novel again actually i had high expectation from this novel the way you started it but everything crumble when you stopped this novel 10 months ago