WoodenPaw
Ohhh so cordelia have its own fmc view
Tú é um baitola kkkkk
60th chapter's speech by Sian is the best, I enjoyed reading the parts where he gives beating to those who is asking for it *_*
Yeah this story is pretty bad like in the beginning it literally says that she dies in her past life cause a pilot was bribed. To plant a bomb IN HIS OWN PLANE
The first four chapters are beautiful I hope you continue it
Author don't drop this, This is good, I like tge premise, it's still early to give a real review, but it gives me high expectations
its nice to see another author from Nigeria here, keep up the good work
Do you plan on making this book available anywhere else other than Webnovel. Is so, were? Also this is a great book.
Eine echt gute und düstere Geschichte. Ich fand schon immer die Schurken die Stadt mit Muskelkraft lieber mit ihrem Gehirn gearbeitet haben besser. Ganz besonders die Schurken, die aus Gotham kommen da sie in der Regel auch ein wenig verrückt sind weshalb ihr genialen Einfälle besonders interessant sind.Danke für die Geschichte und ich hoffe dass ich vielleicht doch in der Zukunft fortgesetzt wird.
Definitely piqued my interest. I'm a sucker for romance especially when the God's are involved. Father son quarrels. Cherry poppin foreplay. Keeps me wanting more that's for sure. I would like more updates of chapters to be stable but I'll take what I can get cause all I can do is wait. #shameless ??
Change the Canon Fodder's Fate lol. What unique plot there is and the author had created the system world in the most comprehensive way that it is so realistic. Can't wait to read for more. Loca is here!
The writing style of the author at the beginning of the story had a nick and pick at places. But the later chaps show that the author has improved his writing style. It is really difficult to follow the schedule and keep up with stable updates. So it is commendable.I like how it was not only abt coming back for his wife but also for his daughter. The daughter's character makes the novel a bit more fluffy.CRITICISM- There are some paras that are loaded with information that makes you wanna skip it(at the beginning of the novel). But it ends up being some useful info which I feel like I later missed. So don't put too much info when a character is introduced-since there are people who try out the novel without having an ounce of knowledge on cultivation. They may feel difficulty in reading it.Except for this, I think it is a great story.
