This the first story I took interest in and that I actually wanted to read it to the end but since that could take some time can someone tell me why there is a question mark on human race I’m dying of curiosity
The novel started as a good one but as time went on it actually because more interesting and addictive. The writing style of the author also improved significantly. And I think the best part of the novel is the main character's system or golden finger which again more of a supernatural power than a game style window which gives quests and rewards. His power allows him access modern day knowledge and impart them to others in a way that they would feel as if they have received an inspiration which will lessen the dependency to the mc in terms of technology and help in unique innovation of the particular sector.
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This is not a story. It seems to be just a bunch of copy and paste from a bunch of different resources/references or websites. I haven’t seen any story or plot in here and don’t know where all the 5 star reviews are coming from. It looks more like the material someone is using to write a college term paper.
Three hours: a gamble of time is definitely the right title for this book. only in this book, i smell poetry, sci-fi. The world background is excellent and the diction to which every event is portray is top notch. Nice work author.
The intention and idea was there but the grammar and poor character design is what really kills this book. Some parts make zero sense. Should it ever be revised i’ll come an take a look again.
Wonderful writing. Very well put together. I love the characters and how the story builds around them. I can tell you put some good thought into your writing.. Well done my friend.
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Okay, here we go. Your entry was a bit of track but you got back into the story when he went back in time. I saw u tried to add a bit of pink atmosphere with him noticing things only the bent will. But the best friend character still needs more of a personality fill in. I mean is he dominant, timid ,etc. I need this expressed in him every action. Well i can't wait for your updates
Although it is very early to review still I must say this is super duper nice. I loved the creativeness and effort of creating the setting. The pace of the story so far is perfect.Writing is up to the mark. Waiting for the story to unfold. :)Good work.
This review is written after reading the latest chap at this moment. (Chapter 7)I'm not the type of person who casually gives a half-hearted review to please others and I'm brutally honest about it... Perhaps...Anyway, the writing quality is quite good and there were no major mistakes that could take one away from their reading immersion aside from a few tense shifts. But the latter can be worked on through editing.5 for story development. There were no forced interactions and everything seemed logical so far. Just that, the gods felt so weak in my opinion.Characters aren't fleshed out yet and this might be because of the lack of chapters. This includes the MC himself. <- This opinion may change depending on how the author approaches this point.Update Stability 5Aside from the characters, the setting wasn't properly explained yet. Again, this might be because of the lack of chapters. But the good thing is that I can see development in this area.All in all, this book has the potential to reach top 100 for originals (based on my experience). Only of course, if the book manages to get its well-deserved attention.
simply an amazing book, well written. The only possible downside is when I hit the paywall seven months ago. the author stopped updating. If he lost access to his account, or moved to a different platform could someone please add a comment leading me to his new profile? Even with the sudden stop this book is far better than most I have seen on this site.