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Xin Fan flashed to the space in Tong Hu's blind spot. Without giving Tong Hu time to breath, he punched forwards.
He laughed to himself as he changed the lens on his scope over to heat-vision.
"Ow!" he exclaimed.
"Hey kid, we just want you to come with us nice and peacefully, we don't mean you any harm, just come with us and we can talk things out, I promise." The leader of the black men spoke.
Lin feng was presently sixteen years old and in a month's time the feng family will conduct the coming of age ceremony. By then he will become a full fledged adult in this world and he will also reveal that truth that he can cultivate to his mother.just thinking about how happy his mother will be then he smiled a little.
Lin feng smiled "mother I just gone out to buy some books.I also bought something for both of you as well" saying so he took out a beautiful looking bracelet and necklace. "Mother this necklace is for you and this bracelet is for little yin".
“Mom, what was that pill you gave me earlier? I feel like my injuries are nearly healed.”
What a First chapter amazing and sadly one too keep it up ????
I won’t lie, the story progression is a little slow early on, but still enjoyable and not like a snails pace. The mc’s decisions make sense with his ability and past but it can still be frustrating to see him push people away.Thanks for the book!
one of the worst. Writer has basically made the good piece of work a garbage by mixing modern technology.it is really bad when writer is kixing modern technology with ancient knowledge. writer hasn't grabbed that of he want to build an ancient world mixing it with modern things make it loose the interest.
it's a work of art the story is intresting which keeps absorbed in the story the backlog the chaps are too few , hope u keep up the cultural work
Astonishing, the characters are well-written, and it's a fresh concept, I like how you described the situations and scenes, the plot is creative and the book is well-composed! Highly recommended. You have done a great job, keep it up, author
