Honestly in the first 20 chapters if you removed all the talk about how useless the knight class is there would only be about 5 chapters worth of content. it's the default class that seemingly a large amount of people have to take due to lack of options but this story falls into the pitfall of everyone having an opinion on the MC and we have to hear from each one friend, rival, teacher, parents, principle, random classmates, etc.
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GTFO from my library you annoying scoundrel.
1 Star I'm gonna spam 1 Star once each day until you begone from my sacred library.
get outta here begone thot
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This seriously needs more chapters. The foreshadowing and little by little world building are amazing.
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Honestly this novel has a lot of potential, it could be up there in the future with author's pov, But as of now it could get a lot better. Author you should put more weight into your story, for example we never knew how many students are actually attending the academy or how many teachers are teaching what subjects and how the educational system actually works, and for being called the 'best' academy it's a little bit weird how a mere C-rank could become a teacher, considering that they are teaching nobility, you know like... Noble households that are probably filled with S or SS rank members. You could also expand the main cast, I think 3-5 characters is a little bit on the small side but it wouldn't an issue if they get enough character development
Give it a try, you just might like it.
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I love this story. The characters are very intriguing and I feel sucked in by the plot. I didn't come here expecting much but it really exceeded all my expectations and now it is one of my favorite stories. At times, the story is disturbing, at times the dark humor makes me chuckle but all in all its very very amazing and I can't wait to read more of it.