I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I'm curious about the female figure at the beginning of the story who is said to be a mysterious figure who invites Sakamoto, what she said sounded very suspicious
I really like the way the author describes the story. From this story, we can learn many life lessons. I'm waiting for the sequel, Thor!! Fighting!
Hi, Good start! The synopsis is great! I believe that if continued, then it can go to great lengths... Keep up the work. The chapters are pretty interesting, I hope the author continues writing...
Came read this because I thought it would be like greatest of all time but I was disappointed he is mediocre like he has no special skill to him he gets ball stolen from can’ score like the list goes on
This gotta be one of the worst Mc ever in the history of novels. The dude got 0 points in intelligence. He gets upset at every little thing and will jump into any trap and then be like oh why are you doing this? The whole story is about him simping over this chick he just met. The cultivation ranks were super confusing at one point. Still don't get why he didn't kill some of the people. Like his GF uncle who is an evil person but he kept letting him go after saying you're dead over and over.
To be honest, there are two things you need to fix. Firstly, the use of punctuation for some of the dialogues, it'd be better if you insert commas.Secondly, you always repeating the action but also including it in your dialogue e.g. He sighed. "Sigh..."In this situation, if you already wrote the character's action, you don't need to express it in the dialogue because readers could tell the character was sighing
anyone knows it's raw? I kinda liked this one.
not a bad novel..pretty good read..????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Loving the book so far
Please keep doing more as this is my favourite now
And I'm hooked I cant wait till you release more chapters
Keep up the good work
I can see that Bai Li is going to be the FL wifey. they would be so adorable together I cannot wait to see if there is going to be romance between the two of them
Based on the actual chat, I found it to be quite funny. I don't know where this will lead to, hopefully it will be a short funny novel maybe 100 chaps at most.