Death... and me

Pretty much here because I have been following Krune for a long time. The two chapters left me laughing at the end, so I think it's worth a try.
Another thing for those who follow Suiyan's work with the wisp for a long time is that you can see the difference between the time when he started wisp, and when he started this new book. Especially English related.

Suiyan, don't think that I forgot about those 100+ chapters with run-out sentences. Hahaha! Just joking. I'm happy to see the improvement in your writing. I'll be following this one from now on too. After all, I love comedies.

I hope that this new book goes well. Of course, above all, it has to be interesting, and the first two chapters were very good already.

From the first two chapters, we have a mystery, an awesome relationship between the MC and Death, a fun MC, and a hilarious setup. 100/10, excellent start to a novel. Can’t wait to see what the characters get up to in the future!

I like the story so far. It progresses at a nice pace. Neither too fast nor slow. Keep up the good work. I dont really know what else to write, so webnovel lets me post the review.

I'm so poor that I can't read the other chapters that are locked..... I asked my parents and then they gave me a scary gaze.. Help meeee!!!!!!

I have currently read up to chapter 565.

This review will contain spoilers but I recommend people to keep reading because the entire story pretty much gets destroyed around chapter 500; and I wouldn't want someone to waste his time reading up to that point.

Up until around chapter 500 this story was one of my favorite books on this site; the characters were interesting and the concept of having 2 main characters was extremely unique and entertaining.

Unfortunately, for some reason the author decided to do the worst possible mistake he could have done, kill off 90% of the characters and story-lines.
After introducing and developing many characters and storylines into the book, the author has decided to cut them all of all together by literally destroying the planet on which the story took place.

To me it seemed like the author didn't like what he built up to that point and thus decided to completely restart the entire plot line, leaving behind many unfinished side plots, and characters who were introduced but not properly developed.

To make things worse, after this "plot twist" took place, the main characters of the story who remained alive didn't show any signs of grief that should have taken place considering almost everyone they ever loved had died.

Considering I had a truly loved this book before the major "plot twist" took place, I implore the author to please explain why he decided to make such a unreasonable change to the story.

Thank you for reading this review, and sorry for any grammar or spelling mistakes that might have been in it as English isn't my first language.

I read all the way up to 500 chapters, and i can only say that im disappointed. at first it was a funny novel with a new take on the cultivation worold, but then. THE WOMEN came

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One of the first interactions with malaka was that she tried to follow the twins, and she almost died. when they got to the sect she got taken in by a part of the sect that is only for women (pretty stupid) all of that blue orchArd divition girls were entitled brats who looked down on you because of your gender. all girls think they’re better but they scream when someone stream steals their plane panties. they were but i read through it.
Then they go to the profound abyss where they meet another brat which forced to help because of the system. this girl falls In lOVe with ROan then they go to the capital and rean is forced to marry a princesS he doesn’t like because of a MISUNDERSTANDING. she tries to R*PE him, but he just laughs it off. now we have 3 braindead characters following the MCs (they’re also braindead) omg i can’t put into words how horrible the story gets.