Better than your other works but can still improve try using gramerly for edit after writing ...It deserves 5 ? Nice ? ?
A great entry into the LitRPG trope. What makes this story a bit different is the blending of the real world and virtual. The main character's family is evil and in order to combat them, he has to gain control of the company his grandfather left him and conquer the virtual world his mother and maternal grandparents created.The story isn't perfect, and I'm not a fan of the wastrel ******* image the main character has decided to engender as camouflage, but the mix of high tech real world and fantasy virtual is certainly interesting. It reminds me a bit of The Stork Tower series. The only real complaint I have is that this story is actually a bit better than the author's other novel and I hope this becomes as popular and enjoys as diverse and in-depth world building as that series.
it was great at start (atleast till 100th chap) and i don't really about if it is farming or not but then it suddenly did a twist and started to become horrible like the author even forgot that some of the scenes even happened . after 100 th episode his strength is varying like crazy like sometimes he can kill an peak epic grade in head on fight and then sometimes he is only a little stronger than legendary grade 1. and people even seem to forget he can kill a epic grade and thought he was arrogant to challenge a legendary grade when clearly legendary grade is lower than epic and as once said that the gap in strength is huge. and it was said that epic grade are at the top just after sanctuary grade but a random guy ( bully ) just came and author just declared that his stats were equal to some epic grade expert (and he was just a black gold grade 6) . it was just nuts
ok i'm liking it so far, but god damn is it annoying reading how obsessed das is with elena. like, he saw her die in a video game and he felt like his soul was ripped out? give me a break man. one of my biggest pet peeves in novels are overly emotional and romantically obsessed protagonists.
AMONG US SUSSY ?????????????????????????????WHEN THE IMPOSTER IS SUS?????????????????????????
Great story with a nice writing style as well as good language use, enjoying every bit of it. Highly recommended. Chapter lengths are good and flows well. Wishing all the best to the author and keep up the good work
i love what Ive read. the writing style made it so easy to understand the thrilling book. I always read romance fantasy but still even though this work doesn't have romance i am still hooked to this as the action/fighting is not boring to read, the conflicts made me want to read more of more chapters to feed my curiosity.
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Complete Trash,Complete Trash,Complete Trash,
this novel ends at chapter 160+.. the author dislike the way the novel flow of direction.. i dont know the reasons but i think it mismatch what the author wants.. or he got lack of ideas for the next arc/chapters.. mc pet got strong so fast..
Honest reviews are here.. It is a typical Chinese novel where transmigration MC possesses the trash young master and hate by all member in his clan and suddenly gets a system to become a strong cultivator so fast that everyone thinks it impossible EXCEPT this novel rather focus on auction than cultivation/fight.. The novel title "trillion rebate" got nothing to do which the novel.. As I read until ch.154, the highest rebate MC got is 10,000 times rebate.. But there are no truth in author calculations. It is a random algebra with nonsense calculations.. For example, "500x rebate low rank 5 beast will give MC high rank 5 beast" or "5000x top rank 5 weapon will give MC top rank 6 weapon" or "10000x top rank 6 pill will give MC top rank 9 pill"??? I'm not sure how the author calculated all this random multiply.. It totally nonsense.. But if you are looking for OP MC, you might like it a little bit.. MC has many strong skills, techniques, and cultivation, but the author rarely explains about it because this novel really focuses on auction.. The author also makes the MC stupid by letting him fall in trap MULTIPLE TIMES even when MC knows it really a trap.. MC has stealth skills that make even the higher realm powerless and can even one shot his elder clan, but he is just playing with him to the point that the small trouble becomes incomparable huge trouble.. Maybe the "trillion rebate" will happen in the last few chapters?? Well, only people who read this novel to the end know about it..