This is the only novel that consistently made me laugh so hard.
At first I was reluctant to read it but since I love the author and have read his previous works I give it a shot and boy I'm glad that I did, you'll have fun reading this. Well yeah our FL is OP but who cares she's just freakin hilarious you'll get to love her.
I read it through google translator on my cell phone, after "chapter 62: Dragon" the translation is all buggy not giving me to read it.... I had to drop the story for that!
if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((
I rarely enjoy reading Game / System' novel. But this story' is an exception for me. It's beautifully writen, fast paced but not too fast, and the flow is balanced. I really enjoyed it. good job author, keep the good work!
Wow!! This is a nice story. Quite interesting. Sam is just a beast in human form. Why can't him allow small Jessy to rest? At least he's succeeded in taking her parents live, FCS he need to let her be. Any way, I'm yet to know what will finally happen to Sam since he's refused to give Jessy breathing space. How I wish Dave would play his cards well.....Jessy would be the happiest one ever
I'm very much looking forward to this being picked, it's great so far, primitive novels like this are rare, other than this one I can only think of Chronicles of Primordial Wars.
This has potential to be incredible. sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Hello and an honest review from me. One thing I wanted to point out is you may try to break down the long paragraphs and I suggest you to separate the dialogues so the readers could read your book comfortably?take your time to improve because you will get there one day✨
This book is awesome. It hasnt disappointed me at all. I cant wait to see what the author does to give the MC more powers and maybe more elements to use. But the biggest thing is that if you comment at tue end of the chapter and its relevant then the author will take ot into consideration with I think is one 9f the best things in an author because it shows they care and r trying there best to incorporate what u say to make the story better. keep up the great work!!!