An amazing story, updates are stable, and the plot is really original. This story is one that's worth reading, I'm excited to see how this story will develop.
I loved your work author! Keep it up good work. Please update soon as possible so that the readers will stay as your loyal reader. Goodluck! ❤?
This... this really something beyond any harem story available. If you like harem + sci-fi + pirate theme combined with star wars-like plot, this story is really for you. Definitely recommend, mostly because the plot is super intriguing.
Racist piece of shit novel, like other novels with this chinese nationalism bullshit. Don't give a try. And why qidian pick shitty novels like that?
Does anyone have the raw? They haven’t published a new chapter in days. Not sure if they are taking a break or something.
This is not a serious story its a crack fic, not my cup of tea but someone else might like it Ggggggggggggggggggghgbvcdsxxsddddccvvfdcvvvvvbnjuyyreedsweefffttgffredfredsweeeedffedfffrtggffffsweeedsscccwsdedo. Druugs
Wow, I gotta say that's one way to grab people's attention. From the fast chapter, the fights scenes are paced well and keeps the readers at the edge of their seats. And the first time I envisioned Logan he kinda reminded me of Hisoka from HxH, which is a pretty awesome thing! congratulations to the author you deserve all the support your getting.
I Look forward for this noveleverything is amazing from the story to the character development i like how you inspired so many thing from master of gu ( my best novel )
RAW
Hello I am a system. I have rules. They are there so that you, the MC, don't get way too OP too fast. Hm you say that I have exceptions for the rules. That is right. When the author does not want to waste brain power on actually thinking things trough he is able to change the rules at will.Why? I am just a system. The author is my creator, not the other way around. This doesn't make for a good story and makes every dangerous situation appear like the author intentionally screwed over the MC. This doesn't make for a good story? The MC is a brainless fool? Yes, of course. This is a power fantasy.
This book starts off very quickly and that’s a really cool concept. it’s also very cool how the MC goes back in time instead of the normal transmigration. Very creative and unique concept! The world building is great as is the character design. Overall it’s very good though I‘d recommend editing your previous chapters to improve them. (you could maybe try grammerly) Otherwise it’s a very good book! ?
The poor children in the heat i didnt get that far in the story but the start is good and sad but good but i still wonder is he going to save that one girl from that thing or jist die there and not save her i am not sure if she lives or dies because i just read the info but i did read the story well the beginning☺