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"I'm sorry we didn't know, we only knew later on because we were running an errand outside the village. You know with the ensuinh war and all. Let's go inside we'll tell you all about it." The man led Touma inside and told him to sit by the table, the woman served muttons and tea for everyone and they all sat down.
(Kai)
With new strength, his body began to recover the step that previously had and each time walked faster.
He looked at An Ning and took comfort in the tranquil calmness of her face. She stands with him and by him and to him that meant everything. They had been at their worst ever as a couple but survived separately and together against the odds. He just needed to put a little bit faith more in the power of his dreams that he and An Ning will grow old together and perhaps live a life of love and comfort in the coming years ahead.
"Who's this? Someone backing this band of bandits. Is it the one who send these bandits to disrupt my trip on a very bad day? Shit, you're making me pissed already!" She muttered, she summoned twenty swords above her head and once again took out her revolver.
"And how are the borders, Griff?"
He was sure that once everything is over, once everything calmed down, he would be able to convey all his feelings towards Mia.
Suddenly she realized Wren wasn't there! Where had he gone? She tried to croak his name out but it never came. Her throat was completely dry. As she was unbuckling the belt, all the events from last night hit her like an avalanche.
The story seems promising, but it needs a better proofreader.
Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.
the book is really good. It's been a while since I've picked something up on Web novel and haven't been able to put it down. it gets dark and twisted at times. but everyone needs that little bit of darkness in their life. only downfall is waiting for the next chapters to release ?
nothing interesting yet will wait for more chap to put a good review
