Pretty good. Not much useless information dumps (read up to chapter 7) and pacing is great so far.
As long as this is not a harem novel or full plot armour MC then this would be a promising comedy novel.
Most often than not, the novel descriptions rarely tell wether the novel good or not but i will vote this because we need more comedy.
The main character is a Mary Sue, he hears of a problem, immediately knows how to fix it, just because, this leads to there being no stakes and a very boring read.
I would not recommend it, as it has been written without any conflict. despite having such a good premise, it has been squandered by this author. :(
One of the better written cultivation stories. Doesn't have super-rapid power growth, or ridiculous "enemy-of-the-week" type foes to outgrow and then humiliate. Rather, focuses on character development and more rationally driven human interaction, with subtle plots and schemes lurking in the background.
Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.
More interested in system related...
Hope this one will more surprising than others...
will you continue after chapter 66????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
mc without brain, mc without intelligence, mc without logic, this novel will not continue..................... ..........................................
Great plotting, nice story development. Though it also conveys, what to expect from a book, the title is quite straightforward. I look forward to more of its chapters. splendid work author
Great story with touches of history. Kinda reminds me the stories of Jane Austen and a similar timeline. Loved the progress of the story and the characters development.
I gave 5 stars... Not because I've read the story... No... Grandpa gave five stars because I trust the previous review's comment and I believe he was an honest person... Anyway... Good job!
The first-person point of view adopted made the read relatable; I felt like an old man was telling me the story of his youth. I have read just a few chapters, but I am sure it is worth the read.