This story is very engaging and I love seeing what happens next. The character development is unique because the author tells how certain events shape history, but sometimes it can be a little sudden. This story would make an amazing comic even though the story does a brilliant job of helping the reader visualize the story. This is an amazing novel, would definitely recommend, keep up the good work.
Heya! Author here!I decided to give you some positives and negatives about the story to help you all decide if this story is for you. These points are a combination of my own opinion and comments from other readers.Positives:1. Complex yet strict magic system: (Going to insert part of a review I've gotten from a beta reader) The magic system seems, at least on the surface level, to be quite strict and complex spells and mechanics are built on top of more fundemental and simpler rules and mechanisms.2. Proper setup for future plots: (once more going to use one of these reviews) There's a whole lot of setup happening as is to be expected, and I expect that it will unfold into a sprawling tapestry of a hundred plotlines soon enough.... Now at this point some time has passed so this review is a little outdated. The first arc is completely finished and the second arc is in it's beginning stages.3. Great worldbuilding: I believe worldbuilding is this novel's biggest strength shortly after the magic system. Even though it takes some time to be fully explained, there really is a whole, completely thought out, world out there. Both mortal and magical.4. Proper strength system: This ties together closely with the magic system but this isn't a wuxia novel. Someone won't just be stronger because they cultivated for a hundred years longer. The strength increases in a logical way.5: Character with different ideologies: Even though it takes time with my writing to get a proper feel for the characters, each character has their own desires and emotions, this isn't always the same as the emotions the MC feels. Over time you might see bridges begin to burn as different people's desires take them on different paths.6. A large amount of hidden content: Even though it is by no means required, as an attentive reader you might spot a number of hints about the magic system. The magic system is very strict but not everything is completely explained, if you pay attention as a reader, you might have a chance of understanding the three laws behind magic before the MC does.Negatives: 1. Character with different ideologies: Even though I put this in positives, it also fits in with the negatives. Characters that don't agree with the MC at all times can be seen as annoyances by some readers.2. Lack of character descriptions: As an author my main weakness lays in describing characters. I do my best to make my thoughts clear, sometimes this succeeds, sometimes this fails, causing it to take some time before completely understanding certain characters.3. A small number of grammar mistakes: Every now and then I do make a typo, if you leave a paragraph comment I will surely fix this but still, some typos are unavoidable.4. Not really an Isekai (putting another part of a beta reader's review here): If you like isekai, this will be a disappointment, but otherwise a good story. The MC could and should have been a talented native of his world because being from a different planet doesn't seem to have any bearing on the story whatsoever.Thank you all for reading this, I tried to be as impartial as possible.
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great book overall and i was really looking forward to reading it. that was until i woke up to discover that about 20 chapters i have already read have gone premium. its such a letdown cause i had very high hopes for this book
I got up to 42 chapters and I gotta say I like yanderes
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There's really no common sense with this MC. He actually wastes his limited resources on people who almost killed him. It was mentioned in the novel that if he did not see the reaction of one girl, as she was surprised that he was attacked he'd literally be killed.. Then he uses his limited healing potions to actually heal their best fighter? Great logic and thinking here.The girl he actually saves wants to kill him and kill herself because he saw her naked. Its totally extreme. If she has obligation to kill herself because of tradition of her race, she can go ahead and do it, but killing someone who saved her life?Why does he have any obligation to teach people that tried to kill him? They should be grateful if he just left without killing them or punishing them in any way.After that he summons some legendary pet that literally extorts him yet it is his pet.. If you have a pet in any game, you can decide if you want to feed him or give him anything, in some games they can run away if you don't treat them well but requiring rare resources every time they get summoned would never be normal occurrence.
Bro I like it how you make a world and define them but make a op mc and you make him believe he is weak I hate it,don't take offense on this but it is better if you make the mc have logic us
Wow this looks promising and a good amount of updates everyday. I shall take a journey with my fellow men of culture and I hope to see you on the other side.
This is my frst review and my english is not god-tier, so I apologize if there is anything that can't be understood.First of all, I have to say that even though this book doesn't have too much chapters (at least in the moment I am doing this review) I think that have a great history with an MC that is not really OP but has a great Character Design with a strong sense humour sense that makes him singular and memorable. I personally love how he reacts in his mind when he sees Xianxia tropes like an arrogant young master, a jade beauty or a crazy murder MC.About the history I can't say too much for now (the premise is engaging and the author is doing great things with that). About the World Background, I think that this history presents a logical world and (at least from what I readed) a reality that show us how a Xianxia world is for the people who is not a protagonist in his/her history Xianxia. I personally recommend this book.
So this lazy guy, who always fails in his classes and causes trouble, gets a system that allows him to be a salted fish.He's the type of MC who believes they're the most handsome genius in the world and takes every chance he gets to brag about his achievements to others and rub it in. Typical face-slapping protagonist who angers everyoone around him.Female lead is a genius student who transfered to the MC's school for some reason that's not explained. Fromca rich and powerful family, violent temper (firecracker), and flat-chested.
I like the concept, but it really identical to the novel,"World Online" were mc is also betrayed by his closest friend in-game then wakes up a week before the game launch. But yeah, this novels good one.