Fix him? I wondered as she continued to walk without saying another word. We got to the school gate, and she waved me off before heading back into the school compound to get her car while I started walking back home.
Peter pushed his sight to the limit while peering out over the city.
"Shut up man! Stop teasing her." Mark stepped in between them. Wrapping his left hand over her shoulder he brought Mia closer, " Don't mind him love." He added softly.
When Shen Tian heard that he widen his eyes, then his expression turned into hostile as he stared at Hàte.
…I think she's picking up that I keep aiming for her forehead, oh well, melee times.
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Nice to see another author from Nigeria ?
This I the Author, I'm writing this cause I've always loved inhuman MC, Please give your honest review, If you have any questions that need to be answered, you can ask them here, I'll answer as soon as I see it.
the story line is good and it's.flowinf with less exaggeration
Pues, es una historia interesante. Lei hasta el capitulo 9 (que es el mas reciente), y quede satisfecho.- Calidad de los parrafos: En general, me atrevo a decir que esta bastante bien. Lo digo por que, a pesar de que me cuesta imaginar la mayoria de las escenas, puedo ver que el vocabulario no es un punto debil. (En cambio, diria que es uno de los puntos mas fuertes.)- Historia: Hasta ahora, el desarrollo de la historia tambien lo veo interesante. No puedo decir mucho sin entrar en detalles, pero en general fue relajado, pero NATURAL. La parte de relajado es algo que aprecio por motivos que voy a aclarar despues, pero lo de natural tendria que ser bastante obvio.- Personajes: Pues, son realistas. Con eso me sirve. XD- Lore (transfondo del mundo?): Eh, hay dos opciones aca: O le falta, o no preste suficiente atencion. Hasta ahora, nomas se sabe el nombre del pais en donde se encuentra el protagonista, Axel, y la existencia de la familia Winter, un nombre que parece tener mucha influencia. Me gustaria saber mas.Conclusion: Me gusta. :DPD: Si escribi esto de una forma rara, es por que no tengo un buen control sobre el Español (a pesar de que es el idioma con el cual naci), asi que me disculpo por eso. PD2: No se si falta algo.
I myself am not a fan of stories that are similar to how Awespec writes, and by that I mean, writing an MC in such a fashion that it seems the author has a vendetta and wants the MC to genuinely suffer time and time again. Dyon Sacharro from rebirth of the nameless immortal god is a great example. MC is a great guy, but instead of challenges, he’s genuinely just forced to suffer. He takes Ls in such a way that it feels like it has less to do with realistic circumstances as it does the author trying to smite him in dark ways
One of my favourites. but the update righ now is halted. I hope author continues this story.