its a great story so far. i recommend it. better then the trashy novels out there. just wish there was more to his system. maybe a bit more uniqueness?
Basically the generic cultivation novel with a huge weird harem.But mc is taking his time and just enjoying his life so far, no useless tension or drama in the family, or a new degenerate young master to slap every chapter.It says OP in tags, but it's more of a gradual op and an organizational kind of op, not just like author said, a lone wolf op, which is kinda okay, has it's pros and cons.**: written after reading chp 21.
When will they reLease chapters? Or No chapter? Lol
The book title itself and its genre, I cam say that this is full of action and I really love the genre. The contents and all of the character and world developments are on point and well done. Lovelots, Ate Ciieee
Is there going to be an actual system? It said that he was send back to the past, thats to say the system he created wasn't created yet? Or is it like he had a second body that recreate all the events that happened in the past and the main body controls the system? Will looking forward to it.
First of all, I would like to say I'm impressed in how fast you update. Do you have a backlog or are you just that fast in writing? Either way, it doesn't affect the quality and I am impressed.The writing is good, it has a distinct flow that makes you wanting to keep on reading. Although, there are sentences or paragraphs that needs work. I assume you do not have an editor so this is understandable.The progression or development of the story is kind of slow, but the writing makes up for it. Even if the build up is slow, when you reach the 'climax,' it feels rewarding. I also like the air of mystery you add here and there.Lastly, the world building. Since this is an MMORPG set in a fantasy world, I suggest you go crazy with your creatures and locations; make it as expansive as you can. I'm already impressed with the number of races the story has, I'm expecting the same for the world too.Overall, I am intrigued by your story! I want more and I want to go on an adventure with the MC in that weird game of infinite races.
From the info the main character is like a brat and it feels like any other novel the guy gets bullied becomes Super awesome then gets revenge and so on.
Super coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolBring us more more chapters per day.....and kindly make it long run so we can enjoy more....And thanks to author nd writer ,editer........
I'm going to be honest, the MC starts of extremely OP, basically Chuck Norris-tier one-man army, and you can tell from the various scenarios in the first chapter. Also from the first chapter, we can use foreshadowing to predict that the author will be extremely biased towards the MC; Even MC's sisters was spared from death indicating lack of any tragedies in the future and the novel will most likely just be a Stomp-on-NPC type novel.Not sure why the author would come up with such a stupid family evaluation system. Sexist maybe but it certainly dies imply that males should marry as many wives as possible? No Emperor would implement such a retard-level caste system requiring a male heir because guess what? 50% of all births are males which means that 50% of the population are by definition aristocrats and would be entitled land from the government, rent out, and collect taxes from their fiefdom. What about individual contribution? Would you fire your generals because their sons died in battle for the country? Wouldn't this force the sons of generals/commanders/etc to not inherit their fathers battle knowledge? If you were a commoner and have to send your sons out to battle, if you lose your son then you would basically be doomed to stay in your place in the caste system and never move up; Essentially locking your upward mobility if you were poor. We all expect future dystopias but man, we already have a dystopian-style historical empire. Huge amounts of logical fallacy.Uprising anyone?
So, this story seems somewhat fine in the early chapters, but it quickly spirals out of control later on. His Junior Sister is a straight up idiot even though she is someone who is reliving her previous life. It's like she learned nothing and is focused on growing stronger even though in doing so she is standing out so much that it is putting her entire sect and senior brother in danger. The MC spends a lot of his time trying to clean up her mess which in turn creates bigger messes. You'd think someone who lived an entire lifetime would have more sense.The system is like a signin system, but it requires him to do menial tasks. It's not too bad and the MC is somewhat okay, but he has some problems too.
Great story over all with sense of fresh touch in it compared to other cliche novels out there, i hope it got picked because i grow tired of the available books without any little bit of originality.REALY PLEASE PICK THIS UP !!!
I really like the story. the author can describe the story really well. but, i feel pity for Nico. keep spirit author .keep up the good work.