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I think this story is very likeable .. And i think i recommend this to be read by others because it is interesting.. So you should read this novel !
I love the story plot, the way the MC create new skills, almost everything is fine, except for all the guild matters, how is even posible that all the guilds are "famous" and they have ranks like general, colonel, lieutenant and they guild didnt even exist or at least they are not created yet, thus dont make any sense, also they talk about pro players but no Esport from RML exist, the way that you are developing the guild matters are like the way described in the king's avatar, but there, they have an Esport for background, there is no way that every player know from which guild belong which player because the guilds are not created yet, you can say that you are from X famous guild and they have to believe you, this do not make any sense, also every guild member act like a Chinese sect and is so boooooring in that way, we want a story about a cultivator in a video game vs normal people or even skilled people that are a world champion in X martial art or X discipline like archery or something like that not another wuxia story with boring sect things
Most of the females of this novel is trashy... seriously If I was Mc's place I would have chosen the true one. Who doesn't care about money or fame... Bunch of shameless fl..
I’m really bummed Hayden was killed off. At first I was starting to get upset with the story and how hard it just started veering off when she found Hayden and her pack. But then I fell in love with how he treated her and called her Angel and then you just kill him off like nothing man.
Very slow update, losing interest
Omg do so good after the first one ! And I love how you start building your third book from here ! Great job author xx
nice one, love it
I really liked the story line, though it seemed a little fast paced. Hoping for a continuation of the brothers story.
I had a feeling that Lina is Tyler's accomplice. If not, I just hope that the wedding will be Vicky and Tyler's closure. I wish them both happiness specially Vicky. She deserves it more than anyone in this story.
Question for the author: Am I missing something or is meant to be another chapter between what is labelled as Chapter 12 and Chapter 13 that has accidentally not been uploaded? Also, what is labelled as Chapter 13 is the same as Chapter 14? Can this be amended as I don’t understand what is going on.
This story was okay I do understand doing the responsible thing in looking after his pup but allowing the person to live in the same house and allowing her to treat his mate with disrespect and then neglecting his own mate honestly if that was me I would have left him and not come back