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It's amazing, simply the best i've read.
There is not much to complain about here, this is a good novel, the author's writing quality is really good, I like the story so far, yes the character design is great, as for the world background that is good so far, it's a new novel so there are a lot more to see, the story is quite interesting, good job author.
I like the story, I am looking forward to reading this. I am also looking ahead on the character development. Author keep up the goodwork! I know you can do it!
The concept is Great. The execution is amazing. The author takes shows us an alternate scenario that could have happened because of Industrial Revolution and the Wars of Conquest that were raised because of it. The world setting is inspired but still unique. The author uses naming humor to take a dig at the big shots of the history and mythology. It's a fun read!
interesting story. Keep up111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
First, I like the cover of the story:) ( not really the point)Secondly, the story is kind of slow and the female lead character is weak yet kind of scary once her true colours is shown, along with her loyal maids that can be called friends. But is kind of weird how both would fall in love if that the guy is surrounded with ladies while the female lead character being treated like air. The story is still building so I hope to see the romance between them unfold. I
I love it so much. It made me at the intense moments and sad moments. This Tale of Logic has inspire me to drink water aqua. Thanks ??????
I can't understand this like at all trying to read this gave me a headache can you fix the writing quality please.
The story is getting interesting more and more. Author I want to know whether this is vampire or Werewolf or ghost story. Waiting for Ur next update ??
don't read. it's racist .
Most people are commenting about later on i got to chapter 5 but feel like I have missed about 100 nothing makes sense or it does to the me but not to the reader as nothing is explained and I mean nothing he dies and is told he will reincarnate to a world and that world will be random and he will get a power, does he check to see what his power is no because apparently he will lose his memories(not sure when we are told that but ok) then he choses the worst world to go to because of a reason he knows. Yep he chose it because we just ignore the fact that the world is meant to be random oh and if he loses his memories he won't even know why he should of chosen that world but OK, skip to him landing on the new world it works like a game he knows it acts like a game and thinks that's normal , wait what the actual **** is this story writing I got to him pulling some magic out of his ass and getting a transforming wolf girl dog thing before I gave up don't even bother trying if your actually after a story
I came back to this book to build on chapters but holy..... this guy bringing his modern justice ?, and not being able to adapt. this is the same way those ignorant mcs who go off to fight the demon king for peace. He isn't a soldier or hunter bc he seems way to naive with his judgement. The author did the bare minimum of research, trying to give the mc a identity.... anyways this is a copy and paste of your feel good fighting the demon king type story. If you don't mind a lack luster mc this is definitely your story.....
