First of all, I would like to say I'm impressed in how fast you update. Do you have a backlog or are you just that fast in writing? Either way, it doesn't affect the quality and I am impressed.The writing is good, it has a distinct flow that makes you wanting to keep on reading. Although, there are sentences or paragraphs that needs work. I assume you do not have an editor so this is understandable.The progression or development of the story is kind of slow, but the writing makes up for it. Even if the build up is slow, when you reach the 'climax,' it feels rewarding. I also like the air of mystery you add here and there.Lastly, the world building. Since this is an MMORPG set in a fantasy world, I suggest you go crazy with your creatures and locations; make it as expansive as you can. I'm already impressed with the number of races the story has, I'm expecting the same for the world too.Overall, I am intrigued by your story! I want more and I want to go on an adventure with the MC in that weird game of infinite races.
