kartikagarwal
at the beginning , the story doesn't sound interesting but as the story progressed mc cultivation become profonund that's when it's interesting . especially around 700 chapter up, when mc dream into a world like modern world and Begin his live stream martial art and gather Netizen attention to cultivate heavenly merits. recommend Reading.
I'm at chapter ~583 as of writing this review, and well, where to begin? If you're new to this novel, you've probably noticed a bunch of minor but frustrating grammatical gimmicks and character flaws that don't really make you excited to keep reading. This would be a mistake on your part. This begins as a truthfully rather unpolished gem, but the author really hits their stride at around ~100 or so chapters. It's honestly amazing. The main character overcomes his naivete very quickly and is constantly learning and growing in ways that make sense. The world building is slow, but spectacular and logically consistent. The power scaling and power systems don't feel eclectic, despite their variety. Genuinely, just a fantastic novel. And the best part? It's free! By chapter 150, I started feeling really guilty for being able to read it all, expecting the "Unlock chapter for __ coins" popup to show at any point. It never did. The author is meticulous in their consistency. It was a genuine joy to read and now that I'm caught up, I'm hankering for even more chapters. You're missing out if you don't read this, seriously.
It's amazing and a different one story... I have newer read or heard this type of story.... I really liked it and i hope everyone liked it... It's too good.... Keep it up...
Okay, I have read this for the first time and I have to say, not the best, not the worst.The english is functional, there are mistakes but not enough to kill someone. I'd say they are mostly the result of a lack or knowledge about english or it not being the authors first language.The updates seem to be reasonable from what I can see in the table of contents, no problem there.The movement of the story can be a quick at times but for the most part it's well paced. 5/5 on that, good job.Character design is interesting, and I'm sure it'll get better as we spend more time around them. Some characters though they might come off as annoying could be redeemed with enough work and development.Not much to say about world design. It's a got some good ideas behind it and has the potential to go above and beyond.All in all, good stuff, keep up the good work.Requested by Murphy.
Waste of time, I endured till 18 ch in hope It will get better but unfortunately.....Check for yourself if you patience enough.Nothing personal author-san but you have to creat a few books before starting posting something here.
I find this book very fun, keep up the good work author!This book has new elements that I never thought would be in a VRMMORPG novel. I also like how there were little hints in the first chapter that correlate to the whole story. Keep up the good work!
Mysterious and intriguing, cryptic yet romantic. The description is a black hole sucking the readers to jump into the story and dwell with questions. Love and war are of the same thing: win painfully or lose and die. Love that blooms with blood is a tragic thing, yet when it happens either you lose it all or win it all.
If you are looking for a story, with a bit of suspense in the long run, then it's worth giving a try. The thing which got me interested was how he was portrayed as an emotionless killer in the synopsis while till now in the story he is extremely opposite. He is a naive, innocent man because of his memory loss. The other thing worth noting is that unlike other novels, where the MC's parents are dead or just side characters, here I am guessing that they have a role of themselves. Their relationship with the MC is also one of the focal points. Overall if the story is not dropped, it has great potential.
I liked how I was discovered atthe very first moment. Even if there are a few minor grammatical faults here and there, they may be overlooked or addressed afterward. I'll continue reading since I like the book. Keep up the excellent job. I want to praisethe way your tale evolved.?
Good going and fast moving!! The flow is good with a sufficient details to make it more interesting and make us want to read more!! Nice thriller
Another bug lover, please be nice to my kind, Just kidding, this is an awesome story.I'm in love with the characters, they are all amazing people, please keep up the good work and I can't wait for the adventure.
I'M HANDSOME!!!!I'M HANDSOME!!!!I'M HANDSOME!!!!............................................................................................
