Reformat: Adventures of a Battle Academic in a Primitive Land

writing is pretty good for the most part, plenty readable, however occasionally some explanations get somewhat convoluted, but not really a deal breaker.updates arent exactly fast, but writing is difficult so i cant hammer the author for it really.story, honestly it starts out pretty good, till chapter 30-40ish the story is pretty interesting, new things happen, but after that i feel like things starts to get stale pretty quickly, combined with the fact that i feel like the author almost forgot that the game system was a thing between chapter 40-100. theres just a lot of repeat fighting. the power ups feel boring in a way, "i want to see the world in chaos" and he gets time dialation? and then its never brought up again. the cross/church is talked about being something good for like 15 chapters. and its just exp bonus?. ive rambled enough here lets move on.characters. they arent bad per say, just occasionally bipolar. i kind of expect a "reasonable tyrant" type of mc, but he just switches between dumb violence, and stupid sympathy.world background is fine-ish, and is fed pretty dynamically, eg not info dumps. but i still feel like i know nothing. i think alot of this can be attributed to the small scale of the current "world" since its effectively like a 1km radius and its being described almost a bit too much for whats actually there?anyway i ended up putting it on hold at chapter 128, i dont hate the story, it just feel really dull to binge. good luck

So those Mc harem has traps? If it those would the mc let the traps bang with his women? .......................................................

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I liked how I was discovered atthe very first moment. Even if there are a few minor grammatical faults here and there, they may be overlooked or addressed afterward. I'll continue reading since I like the book. Keep up the excellent job. I want to praisethe way your tale evolved.?

Chelsea was definitely looking forward to the moment when all the misunderstandings were cleared up. But, now was not the right time. Even she could understand that much.

'Nice move by these kids. They are forcing us to surrender by grouping up in a fight. He even started with a exorbitant demand so that he can make some concessions and getting extra good stuff while making it look like their factions are generous.'