kartikagarwal
Cmon man please start writing again. I literally can’t read other novels cause their quality feels subpar now. I’m addicted and favourite drug dealer isn’t selling me my drugs. I need your product. Come back...
the writing is poor, details don't match up, it's very basic with so many plot holes and loops I'm surprised webnovel actually picked it up
anyone know what chapter in raw this guy finally enter in sect of House wan Jian? -.- I read like up to 200+ in raw and still could not find it. It is very boring because translation is super slow despite having 2900 Chapter. if 1 chapter a day. You will die before you complete the series. 1 year - 360 days. So u can only get 360 chapter in 1 year or LESS. I say Less. maybe 300 chapter in 1 year. So it will take 10 Years for translator to catch up to 2900 Chapter. I dont know if i can make it ill be 62 in 10 years.
This is a transmigration story. The MC ends up in world with a relatively weak martial arts system—no immortality, instant healing, flying or fireballs—just greater strength and agility than any human warrior could ever achieve. Nonetheless, the story is reasonably interesting. Then the MC experiences death, lives a long time as a phantom and eventually returns to his own past with the opportunity for a do-over. Only then he is living two parallel lives in two very similar alternate universes—with one running a few years ahead of the other…it got a bit too busy for me and I halted at Chapter 303. I may pick this story up again sometime, but probably not
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IET is one of the few author's who manages to create story's that keep the enjoyable elements of cultivation novels but without any of the other cliche BS. I didn't even begin reading but I am pretty sure that this will turn out great as already seen from his previous novels.
I already read ahead to the lastest chapter, this novel is the most boring novel I read. Why ? Because each problem only last 20 volume and those problem are big. There are many explanation about spell art that I don't care
Sinceramente, una de las mejores novelas que he leído.Pocos errores menores con la escritura, pero se pueden pasar por alto, eso es todo lo que tengo que decir.
Usually I kind of like these types of novels where the MC enter a retreat for centuries and come out op.But that is when the structure of the novel is done well, the grammar is without mistakes and that the system is also understandable.Unfortunately here everything is a mess. The cultivation levels are all over the place and you can't understand at which level the MC is at, the system is sometimes on and sometimes off, the grammar is in dire need of editing fast.So to sum it all up, not recommend!
Ran Qing and Wann Xinruo please and the others.Aside from that I really recommend this novel, the flow of the story is very nice, not too fast not too slow.
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I'll say that the story has potential, Villains are interesting and MC's OP, One thing i would suggest author is to balance the story as currently (at the time of writing this review) it's just dark and for fellow readers just give it a try, you will like it and even if you don't like it, don't worry, you can forc- i mean persuade author to improve it by giving them suggestions on their discord.PS: There, you can bully them too
