I like this type of stories and I wish the ice queen proctet the ML and the Will live happily till eternity.and I think Male lead must accept the love of FL.
The grammars are okay, easy enough to understand the storyline, which actually okay for this kind of genre, though it's not the usual one I would like to read. Not that fast pacing, but going into that direction
The core story progression point in this novel is flawed. Lorne wows the king and his attendant with his analyses of current events in the world, despite the fact that it is impossible for him to know anything. The tavern he owns has no customers, as the author points out, while Lorne does not go out, or at least, it isn’t stated or even hinted. Lorne has no personality, heck, we aren’t even given a description of his physical features, ambitions or background. The explanations feel rushed, and aren’t substantial in any way.TL;DR this is a miss.
Hello guy's/girl's and whoever else is out there, I writing a review in hopes that this novel gets more attention, so far the story has been hilariously funny, at the same time it's been making me rage and cry in anger at the same time, the characters in the story especially the goddess has been trolling the mc since the beginning of the story, it's gotten so bad that even a coldblooded killer couldn't help be feel sorry for him, but of course that doesn't stop the goddess from giving him thorny early birthday gifts. But that's not all this story has to offer, so far the character design/development has been outstanding Rika, Orthis(i'm not sure i spelled his name right), Risa, and Sahria, has had the most character development so far, I've read far enough to read to a recent chapter where it looks like the love interest has appeared (this may go down the Yuri route after all, i mean he's still is a man at heart). The only thing it leads a little more of, is the world building, I have heard a little bit about what happened in the world, such as to why the racism between beastkin, and humans are so bad, but I have yet to get a general layout of the world on a Large scale view, such as to what kingdom, fiefdom, or area of the world he(she) currently lives in, or is whether or not that town is the only one that treats the beastkin like slaves or is it on a International scale. other than that, you can honestly say this novel has little to no flaws, and I'm really/seriously/honestly/hopefully looking forward to more chapters in the future.
Very funny story about our little girl Rika. Truly is the best girl...fox..uh.. Fox/human hybrid..yeah.Well anyways, it’s a really funny story with an extremely eccentric MC, though as a male he’s quite...horny, would be the best word for it. More likeable as Rika, the Goddess is also great, Author’s Notes are great stories and the fantasy setting fits with the quirky characters, weird situations Rika gets into and how her ‘harem’ is built. Never trust a Vixen’s words and take them as fact, deceit will always be there.Though some criticism is that Rika isn’t judged as harshly for being presumed to be a lunatic, I mean I would definitely think of someone talking to an imaginary person, shouting aloud, dancing naked..sort of and all the other crazy antics. But it seems to fit this kind of story, a bit light hearted on some...eh, unique situations. Though with her dancing moves being put to use, this’ll be even more hilarious. It does have some sad moments, well one really with the Vixen Goddess, with her story. No one praying for her so long that she can’t even remember her identity, only remembering how to use deceit and tricks to joke around trying to make light of her sad situation. I hope we get to know her name soon. Goddess best character!The stories main focus is to make the reader laugh, and I personally got several laughs, chuckles and uh...painful feelings, reading this novel so far and I’ll continue. Good job Aya, talk to you on Discord! Keep it up, I’ll be reading and so will many others.
At this point I like everything, it's intriguing how the guy will handle everything.
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I am the author of this novel, Cultivator in the Modern World. As I am completely shameless, I am gonna give this novel a solid 5/5. I think this will be an enjoyable read for you readers!!This book spans a variety of genre - Slice of life, Comedy, Martial arts, #bestbook, #bestoriginalnovel...Please give it a try!
As in my previous comment I emphasize that it is rushing the story and not doing real world building, I will add that there is a huge problem with the interaction of the characters and the plot in general, where did they meet? When? How did they meet? How was the process of finding a publisher? When did the MC start acting classes? How did he meet his teacher, being that he's a renowned former actor? How was the audition for the role in the theater play and when did it happen?Honestly, I don't want to sound condescending but it is necessary that you as an author acquire the mentality of asking questions in order to be able to flesh out the plot, because in the current picture it seems that the character just gets the things he wants without any difficulty, besides, it sucks that you put things in that should be implied, such as the character's lack of general inexperience in what is due to things like business, among other things. It takes time to improve, take your time and start acquiring a more inquisitive mindset and this will greatly improve your writing.
sounds like the story of one of the protagonists who get rekt in "I am the second generation villain."????????????????????????????????????????????????
this pencil incident is based on fringe series 3season bbpj n k uI 8
Aaaaand it's dropped by author. A shame since the translator is quite good, some name inconsistencies and typos but the rest are good. I've never ever seen any novel with this kind of premise completed tbh, even the one who started the trend Gamers of Underworld was axed.