Seastar222
The translation quality is trash, see e.g.“Great Chu just develop period if this thing is exposed, will lead to the people’s hearts not stable, is to the emperor will never be soft.”
This book is utter s***. The Empress literally rapes the MC, yet its fine. No-one cares, and the Empress acts like HE is in the wrong. This book is utter s***. The Empress literally rapes the MC, yet its fine. No-one cares, and the Empress acts like HE is in the wrong.
I love the back ground of the story. The excitement in the story starts from the very first chapter and draws you in. The writting quality and character development is amazing. Great work!!
I lost some brain cells reading this just by the amount of forced plots, the stupid motivations behind characters actions and when the author makes the mc stupid just to keep the plot going, the only way to enjoy this is if you turn off your brain, and even then I still go a headache after reading 100, there was just too much bs and unnecessary drama...
Even though the story start with usual way. The continuity of the story is completely different. I hope the next chapters won't dissapoint us and writer continue the good work which shows till now.
Wow just wow... I tried... that's all I can say.... I don't understand one thing about this.... it's not the translation. Translation seems good it's the development of the story... who is she? Did she die? ... when did she fall asleep? What is she doing? Now normally this would interest me to continue reading... but my goodness this ? is exhausting to read...lol
Actually, I must agree with foxfire92 for recomending this story... And dare I say this story is one of my fav that I just can't wait for another update and more chp to show...This kind of Side Chara Mary-sueish-yet-not story is kinda got me. And that ZYY is almost like myself in my class except for some part...
This isn't the end of the novel, mtl has Death inquisitor go to chapter 2295. I'm guessing the reason for this having an early end in transulating is due to it not having enough readers and sales of coins as they were expecting. so yeah go to mtl to continue reading.
It's honestly a well-made novel though there are some minor problems within the MC's moral logic. I've read most of the raws so I'll be brief.It's all good until a lot of things begin to unravel which truthfully just adds unnecessary confusion to the already mess that the Mc just neglects. The mess I'm talking about his relationships. He never directly confronts his relationships with the opposite sex. It's always him tiptoeing around while simultaneously making things a mess.There was already a lot of unanswered things yet the author seemed to keep adding stuff as if we're to distract you from the fact that MC is an idiot.
In the world Webnovel, where concepts can be stolen like stealing dirt in the road, i.e., no one cares if you use the same concept or even storyline. And, there comes this novel though the concept is cliche but it isn't using already existing works as the work of Aiden. I might be wrong in this point but the background to Stories/Songs/Movies, Side's POV, emotional state of Aiden and his interaction with them is giving it a edge compared to other existing novels. I hope Dream will stay true to the belief he has in the story and give all of us a memorable journey of Aiden.
Came back to leave another review after my previous one was deleted for being too low of a score.Any novel with three pinned comments is hoghly likely to be garbage, and this one is no exception. Not to mention one that has to delete reviews to keep its score afloat, as if reviews on this site even mattered.Nothing else needs to be said.
Really great story! The grammar could use an edit but overall it wasn’t enough to detract from the story. Great job, author!
