Best comedy short story ever =D i'm glad you ended it with a happy ending instead of the alternative ending. lol does he really need does fonts thou? he could get new ones, more "fun ones" ;)
Love the story and character design. Hope nothing ever happens to Zoe because I don't wanna see my boi the MC sad. Can't wait to see his progress
lol?the MC was so chill and I already love the interactions between him and the system. It's nice to read a frenemies (?) in the beginning of the chapters so keep up the good work author??
Its a fanfic, so why is it in the novel section? And why are the chapters locked?.............................................................
+ chapter pls XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
Very interesting, a third person pov of watching the MC of a xianxia novel and manipulating events to his own advantage, only worrying point is that his progress is too fast, and novels tend to get dropped by the author when he can no longer progress with the story.Hope author-san can plan his progression so the novel can reach chapters in the triple digits...?
I have read many novels about games and time-travel, but this one is really a hidden gem. I like the main character's personality and even his unique thinking. I am waiting for more updates.
The premise of this story is really interesting! Like I'd love to read something like this, but the execution needs some work.The English is okay, but could do with a run or two through grammarly.The update speed isn't up to the standard seen on WN. The plot development seems very forced in a few aspects and lacks detail. There's little sense of time and the MC does these gigantic projects in the space of minutes or hours - yes things are sped up but it all seems arbitrary - theres mot much logic behind time taken and projects completed. The characters introduced so far are slightly different, but dont have much personality to them beyond the basic profilesWorld building is light on details so far, and seemingly random, minimal sense of scale. Thank you author for writing this, Im only giving an honest opinion - I hope you continue writing and improving! Ive tried writing before and its very, very hard!D.W.
I love this book. It's so interesting which makes me continue to read. I'm done with the chapters. Still need more author.
A great story, if you like video games taking over your life, explaining feelings and worldbuilding is awesome. Sometimes it seems the story is slow, but that's because you get a lot of details, which I really enjoy. so overall excellent read if you want a slower, but great story.
No wait. I read that wrong right? Bahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. My god this is a new low. for those that are curious why people are screaming racism and nationalism isn’t because the author shows favorites. No no no... the author states that Not only does the Earth he has in his Dantian have only Chinese, the author states that the MC wishes he couldndestroy the countries and empires he doesn’t like. Yet, this is a novel. Which means it’s written by an AUTHOR. The only country and people that exist within his EARTH are CHINESE. Which implies one thing: The countries and empires he wishes he could destroy? The author already did. He completely removed EVERY other culture of Earth. Which means the author isn’t just racist. He is a physco. This... is just not okay. Especially how the FOLLOWING paragraph when the MC’s inner thoughts state that it’s good because no one else besides the Chinese would understand cultivation anyway. I find that worse than the wishful genoci*e. We are readers. I am a reader. Who LOVES eastern fantasy. I like it because it is much more detailed than Magic. I have read dozens of eastern fantasy novels. With how much I have read of eastern fantasy, I might sadly be able to say I know more about Buddhism and Daosim than my own religion. I am American. I was belittled by the Author. Qidian, this one should have been flagged.
Story is average but translation/editing is MTL rubbish. Either that or editor is non-binary with gender pronoun issues. So many times I've dropped only to pick up out of sheer boredom.