system ✓fat friend ✓once orphan, now has a family ✓the will to 'save' people ✓the book is good but god bless my soul the peanut gallery is infuriating and annoying
This story's beginning has lots of similarities to other novels like Astral Pet Store, sharing lots of key plot points, but it surprisingly gets better. Besides the obviously plagiarized start, the story is actually well written and broke away from the plagiarism which turned me off in the first few chapters. The author has actually made the story his own, making it a good read if you have nothing to do, and the author writes well, matching some of the best novels on the site. If you can bear through the first few chapters, this book is worth reading and should absolutely be given a shot.
absolute trash. same generic revival of qi shit novel. no need to read. go read Sunday of urban immortal cultivator. same as that. nationalistic racist shit from shit of China. psychopathic mc.
Potential but the character development is bad, really bad.. Many important figures abandoned easily, and there's too many repetation on the plot. The world background is 5 star though, but with 300± chapter require a spirit stones was a direct robbery..so for u who want to read this i tell u its not worth it
I dont get why everyone's writing random reviews so imma try. There are two witches watching two watches which witch watching which watch. Try saying that fast.
I like this story and continue looking for more chapters ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It’s not just bad grammar but horrible spelling that makes it seem like you’re losing your brain cells reading it. I understand English is not their first language but yhey can at least put in the effort to search up the correct spelling or invest in a dictionary.
just read the first 20 chapters. I don't like how he starts off with the most powerful weapons in the world. The story is progressing too fast with almost no character development. story is very bland and somewhat unoriginal. would not recommend.
although the title is very lame and in first glance you can think it's some lame novelbut after I read the book I kinda like it , it was not a perfect story but it was enough for me to enjoyed reading it and later go to MTL website and read the raw now that I posting this comment I read about 600 chapter's in the MTL , I can say it was enjoyable story , MC is not retard and he use hi head. so I think this story deserves more attention from people in the end , I just want to say if you don't have a very good books to read you can try this book
This story starts quite sad, so I really hope that after reincarnating the mc will find some happiness. I like that the mc isn't an hypocrite self-righteous mc. Cuz when life doesn't give you a fair shake, being tough and just is the right way. Law not always means justice (I really hate when society doesn't condemn a murderer for his "silly mistake").The story is well written and easy to read, I look forward to reading the new chapters.
You can feel how frustrated Charlie is by everything. All any criminal investigation the police do the bare minimum that’s sad. Will we finally get justice for Juliette?
it's interesting