One Piece - Kill Or Be Killed

Review as of chapter 100. So far so great. Really a good world the author has made, and honestly it felt like the intro just ended. very excited to see where this goes keep it up!

It’s not just bad grammar but horrible spelling that makes it seem like you’re losing your brain cells reading it. I understand English is not their first language but yhey can at least put in the effort to search up the correct spelling or invest in a dictionary.

My biggest worry is the MC just being a system slave. Also not very original P.S: FirstFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller

Very interesting concept, have been looking for a novel like this since 'Legendary Mechanic' and I hope this work gets picked up so I can support it and the great author!However this is a very small excert of what seems to be a massive story, so anything can happen when considering writing quality, world building and character development.We can just hope this gets picked and supported properly.

Great novel. Had alot of potential,however, I don't like mc that is basically an emotionaless robot. So I am dropping this. But since it had a great start,and many people might still enjoy it, so I will ati give an almost 5star rating.

At present the book is in the nascent stage as only 7 chapters have been published. The plot is good and well presented and progressing well.As regards the stability of updates, these will naturally follow. The Character design is good and so is the world background.The writing quality is OK.All the best, Author!