Interesting read. Though still too early part of the novel, it's enough to get my attention. Will continue to look forward to the next chapters. Good luck authorsan!
Honestly speaking it would have been nice if he had brought back those flame horses. Imagine the dragon and his army riding fire horses. Also I think this is the time for his bond dragon to make appearance. Nevertheless this novel is AWESOME.
Just wanted to let you know that you’re book is for sale on kindle under a different name and has already been read and reviewed by multiple people. I don’t know if someone just copy pasted your work or if you upload it under a different name but someone is making a profit of of your story.
Its a pretty average story loaded with tons of references to other authors work. The author does say this him/her self in the comments of nearly each chapter. Which I can only give him/her Big praise for. The biggest Problem i have with it is that these tropes and refernces are just stacked behind each other without much strings between. It read like Multiple storys after each other without fleshing out of any Charakter. Maybe sometime I'll force my self to understand the plot but as of now I am dropping the story At the 30iest chapter Mark.Yours sincrrely,
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(As of chapter 58)Writing Quality (3) - there are may grammatical errors, wrong spelling and horrible sentence structure. The style of the author does not resonate with thus it always break my immersion with. You need to edit the early chapters author-nim. Story Development (4) - first time seeing a urban cultivation novel that I really like the progression of the story amaze me to this point. It is not slow in my opinion (I like slow novels with steady power ups) and it is not a fast paced story too. The plot and turning points is reasonable in my opinion for it has reasons on why did he do that? What would he get from doing that action? And many more.Character Design (4) - The character of the story at first is emotional but as that sin worm crawled out form his mouth(I think?) he regains his emotion. Its refreshing to see him ge frustrated about something and thinks about something not in a rational way.Update stability (5) - Well I'm just catching up and it has a 300+ chapters and I'm a slow reader because I read the novel in detail so it will be long way to go before I catch up.World building (5) - well the author has great ideas for his world and has introduce us a plenty of superpowers in the world that the MC is residing in.Thought- overall a great story. Had a bad writing but it can be fixed. One of the best urban novels that I read and I hope it will stay the same(the only novel that I read in urban genre is this hihi). The pace of the story is OK for me and the character development for me is a bit sudden but still bearable. And I think that's it. Good job Author a good novel this is(I know it's grammatically wrong).
I know this story is still early on, but absolutely amazing so far. I’m looking forward to more from this author. Definitely a hidden gem and Thanks for the great story
Amazing storyline, characters, just absolutely fantastic! The plot always had me on the edge of my seat, I’m so excited for more chapters!!!
Nice novel so far, the characters are well designed and the plot is nice. The only problem is the update stability ? pls author try to fix that ?
It’s unique in its own way like the rating system or ranks that they have its pretty intuitive. Very captivating at the start, and i like the overall manner of how he uses the words to his advantage
This book is absolutely amazing it's well-thought-out and it honestly intrigues me about his past and what his present and future would be like from now on oh and does he have kids.I think this book can go a long way and that is very worthy of being published and I only read a dozen chapters starting to have the urge to binge and I'm going to end up being caught up with the releases and but then I'm going to be like noooooooo~