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A Racist's tale: Making Hitler blush. Srsly tho this is some mega racist's fap material, ignore the other people trying defend this either they are blind to the truth or trying to justify their racist rap material so they can fap in peace.This may get deleted, I don't care just leaving it out there for the few who read this before it goes away.
Looks good, but it got picked up before all 40 chaps were even released? What is going on here?The other novel that was picked had the lowest view count in the last week trial reads, and now this is being picked with just 30 chaps in. Weird.
Anyone know the raw version of this novel?....................................................................................................................
Wow, I am looking forward to reading your work. I usually don't read contemporary romance novels but it's different and appealing. I hope you continue to work on it. Lots of love ❤️ ??
The story flows wonderfully. Characters are likable and comedic. The authors use of language us exactly. Great scenes and a fun read. Keep it up for sure.
I'm truly impressed with this one.I love quick transmigration stories and this is my first seeing one with a male mc, I won't talk about spoiling the story, but I will say that the first arc is very powerful, well thought and characters are all fleshed out properly, no seriously I still have lingering attachment with the characters, and I want the mc to continue living in that world, but when I start reading the second arc boom! I think it's now my favorite, character interactions are just interesting and lifelike.Well even though I loved this story I will be professional since this is a review so I will still have to say cons that I saw to help author sama and some readers.About the thing I say about lingering attachment about first arc is true, and I think the author is to be blamed(seriously) even though it's just a trial but I think Author haven't closed the story very well, ahem sorry for this little spoiler, I seriously thought that the time Traveller girl would be a love interest since I get the fate vibes but I was left in a cliffhanger since he suddenly left in the middle of a "date" (If you already plan the mc to return to previous world then I won't say anymore but if not please consider giving the girl justice by giving her a chapter dedicated only for her.)Even though this story is not that kind of genre the mc should have take his mission seriously and thought more about it, considering he will be dealing with "villainess" he should at least fortify his physical self defense and since he has a goal he should at least be more proactive into preparation since the system doesn't say that it will be always modern world he will be transmigrated in and I always think in real life that what is given can also be taken if he fail his mission his goal might just pop into nothingness unless this saving world from villainess is just farse and failing from preventing villainess to cause harm and death will have no consequences or punishment.Well that's for my review even with the cons I still love this story so I'm giving it 5 stars, cuz also knew that a novel is always a novel and never will be reality that's why inconsistency and lack of data would be always present.
Just checked this out and its another awesome work! Author, well done! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Question for the author, are you English speaking and do you write raw in English or is it translated? Your reviews read very well but the actual synopsis and the novel read very poorly like a swiftly done translation, I admire your dedication and creativity regardless.
Great story nice background settings great exolanations Hope we have some scientific in this novel 140 characters ggfgcggfhffxydufgjshfzjdjtzyksjgsdkysjgdgjsmgzngdmgsmhxmghdmgdmgsmydmhx mhxdkcmgzmgxmgzkgdkgdgmxhmdhmdmhxhmxhmxmhxmhxhmxhmkh
This book is. Hmm...Breathtaking. It is the action for me. the author is well versed at active storytelling. He successfully glue the reader to the stories. I'm more than impressed with the character development. keep up the good work. also I love the rate of update.
I like it a lot was sad that it's over but still the vocab and grammar can do better.Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!
Basically you can skip most of the chapter and you don't miss anything important.The MC is retarded as ****. Gains a scanner of good athletes near 10 meters of him and doesn't abuse it.Has an almighty Wikipedia voice in the head (that is really baby spoon feed basic information like it was a hidden knowledge of the mighty sage) and doesn't ask or test the limits of his answers to plan the most efficient way to use his powers.I already said he is retarded, but why? Well I only read until the chapter 10 but I couldn't stand it anymore. You have a one time buff time for a beginner chest and you want to use it immediately without none to train ? are you stupid?Then, the system tells him numerous times that he can train random people...WHy can't he do it in the spare time he has ? He only trains the fat kids like a part-time job! Use the maximum time of your buff dude !!And then he has a genius (insert meme genius here) idea to say...HEY ! I can train 8 fats kids, if I can train 10.000 kids of high school I can be richhh! Jesus ****...what the **** the author is thinking.Dropped. Don't waste your time.2 Stars because no harem or horny Chinese idiot.
